Make Heroine o Katasetai!! - Ch. 1 - I Want Manaka Kawashima to Win!

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What this really is is a power fantasy. Whether it's frustration at the losing heroine suffering or fakeouts from inconvenient gusts of wind, this is manifesting our wish to keep pushing past those tropes for just a bit longer.
 
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The set up works but i believe the direction its leaning its too predictable.

Ik the other hand this is Keima and Chihiro set up so why not gooble it up?
 
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Oh yeah it's got the hallmarks of a shitty romcom. Also no wonder she's losing, the fumble after fumble good lord
 
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This is great. I really dislike the constant reuse of the same tropes over and over and over in romcoms, so seeing them all subverted or made fun of is refreshing.

Now, that said, I wonder if the author isn't rushing things...
 

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