Makenshi no Maken Niyoru Maken no Tame no Harem Life - Vol. 2 Ch. 10 - After the Monster’s Hunting

[goodhunter]

Damn, this is just a shitty smut manga afterall. I thought the story might be interesting, or that the author will try to make some improvements on writing flow, plot, pacing, etc, but all of that is absolute garbage. The characters feel so one noted and fake that hentai characters have more color and depth to them. And as if that's not bad enough, even the smut part is shitty.

 

[EternalEmperorLQY]

Sigh this has nothing but great art...

 

[shyevsa]

unnecessary "you are important to me" conflict and episode. unnecessary merchant alone inside a dungeon and added a plot armor of "this is free item for you"
the premise actually good, the art also really nice but the story is just that, a trash.

 

[monkey123]

@hajime107
Could you please link the sources of

https://mangadex.org/data/b27093a981bda496ac3029356a93feda/24-64876db5e6a356c9057973702fcf3975c08084c7f6aab91645801372e761086d.png
https://mangadex.org/data/b27093a981bda496ac3029356a93feda/25-6512f3468e82d9aaa7ceefa0a1c801defff5ecdb51c833a86668fd08fd48ea6c.png
?

 

[Her0]

don't delete it... just make it "Uncensored Version" or something

 

[ikki_kun]

@Her0 you know they can just edit it

 

[MaTu94]

This is just soft hen with a poor attempt at story writing, the dialogues are hot garbo and the evolution of events is as predictable as clunky, not to mention the high cringe edgy moments. . . fk I was hopeful at the beginning but it looks good and little else. . .

 

[mrmm]

where the heck the traveling merchant came from ? XD

 

[R4nd0mus3r]

I mean, the man has his priorities, leveling up to have his orgy

 

[entity_101]

@mrmm Random world event

 

[Lecarm]

@monkey123 https://mangadex.org/title/21651/dokyuu-hentai-hxeros for both of them.

 

[monkey123]

@Lecarm
thanks

 

[starburst98]

@Talh
Sistina explained she has a counter attack skill, meaning she can't really do first strikes but is super strong when countering.

 

[Talh]

@starburst98:
That is an issue if the enemy is someone she cannot beat easily.
If she was capable of taking on monsters from floor 8 then beating a monster from floor 1 should be no problem even without using her skills.
So she should be strong enough to take them out without waiting for them to attack.

See what I mean?

 

[starburst98]

@Talh
Except her class itself needs bindings and restrictions to work, one of those restrictions could make her worthless at attacking first.
Example, say she has 10 strength, if she attacks first the magic binding makes her attacks only count as 1 strength, but if she counters she does 50 strength hits.

 

[Rin2k]

In any other situation, MC would be kicking his balls for allowing that clause the "slave's contract". lol

also, as predicted this went downhill fast.

 

[ToraTaiga]

Its just too short lol. Thanks for the chapter.

 

[RanmaChaos]

Thanks for the chapter

 

[N2O]

Didn't have high expectations to begin with, but this is just getting extremely dumb. Besides art, this has the premise+plot that us isekai trash like as well as the harem/character dynamics aspect, and it's failing hard on each of them :/ guess I'll keep it on follow for a while but damn

 

[Myst]

Excuse me.. but there's clearly one single page that look like it came straight out from a fucking (e)R-O-G(e)/Ero doujin, lol.
Since It originally is colored.. make sense that single page is different, lol... just that it become somewhat much more sensual than even the original colored ver. (well duh, those nips got uncens. but that's beside the point)