Manuke na FPS Player ga Isekai e Ochita Baai - Ch. 27.1

[totallytotally]

I know it's been a while since I had last read this series, but I don't remember it being this poorly written? I do recall this being pretty blatant isekai power fantasy slop, but was it always this bad?

Page 5: Guy delivers letter with an arrow
Page 6: MC goes "huh, that guy delivered a letter with an arrow"
Page 8: Bandit at the front gate asks "did you deliver the arrow letter" and Guy responds "yeah I delivered the arrow letter"
Page 10: MC thinks "that letter must be for the magic stone purchasing rights"
Page 15: Bandit tells Evil Noble "we delivered the arrow letter" and Evil Noble says "Soon I will get the magic stone purchasing rights I demanded in that arrow letter"

Not counting Page 1 being from the translator, this chunk of a chapter was only 15 pages long and yet repeated the same few points so many times... And they weren't even all that important! Who cares that the ransom letter was specifically delivered with an arrow? What's the point of having the MC speculate about the letter's contents if we immediately get the same answer from spying on Evil Noble and Bandit anyways?

Just spaced repetition to help you remember what the MC is doing when the next 15 pages comes out in mid 2027.

 

[definitionofinsanity]

Holy shit! An update!

This manga has gone on multiple month hiatuses (unannounced) for like 2-3 times. I'm just glad it's not canceled. But I do wonder what the hell is going on.

And, also, a thank you for a the scanlation teams not giving up on this. You have my gratitude.

 

[definitionofinsanity]

Also, a suppressed Five-Seven hits differently in light of recent events:

 

[GuruMeditation]

I admit it. I really like this stupid manga about a stupid FPS in a fantasy world. I was getting close to moving it to the cancelled manga folder so to see a half-chapter after all this time makes me very happy.

 

[Seinvolf]

Thank u always for ur great work...
^^...

 

[WonderingSFaiz]

God finally an update, I kept telling myself to read the novel but never did

Did he just shout in a STEALTH mission?! He clearly living up to the title name

 

[Belkin]

Idk wth this manga is because it starts at chapter 20 something but I like it.

dude was supposed to become a floor boss in the dungeon, I forgot the detailed information but he basically retained his COD account in another world and it's trying to uncover the reason why/who summoned him to this world

 

[dexdoujinmanga]

The yound lady is kidnapped for over a year now... Wow...

 

[nathan67003]

holy fucking shit

 

[Firemorfox]

I know it's been a while since I had last read this series, but I don't remember it being this poorly written? I do recall this being pretty blatant isekai power fantasy slop, but was it always this bad?

Page 5: Guy delivers letter with an arrow
Page 6: MC goes "huh, that guy delivered a letter with an arrow"
Page 8: Bandit at the front gate asks "did you deliver the arrow letter" and Guy responds "yeah I delivered the arrow letter"
Page 10: MC thinks "that letter must be for the magic stone purchasing rights"
Page 15: Bandit tells Evil Noble "we delivered the arrow letter" and Evil Noble says "Soon I will get the magic stone purchasing rights I demanded in that arrow letter"

Not counting Page 1 being from the translator, this chunk of a chapter was only 15 pages long and yet repeated the same few points so many times... And they weren't even all that important! Who cares that the ransom letter was specifically delivered with an arrow? What's the point of having the MC speculate about the letter's contents if we immediately get the same answer from spying on Evil Noble and Bandit anyways?

highly recommend you read the lightnovel manga are based on, if you dislike how adaptations do things

 

[Boots]

highly recommend you read the lightnovel manga are based on, if you dislike how adaptations do things

What a bizarre thing to say. Do you read a lot of manga adaptations where the characters repeats the exact same thing several times in a single chapter? Do you think this is just standard behavior for a manga adaptation for a light novel?

It seems you misunderstood what I said in my post so I'll try to be more clear here: I'm not complaining about the writing quality of this manga in comparison to the light novel (which for all I know could also have been poorly written at this part of the story), my complaint was about how this manga was getting worse compared to itself from earlier chapters.

 

[CucarachaEnojada]

Save Martha,Save the world.

 

[1234muse]

so edgy.....

 

[77BLc9JwJGpLVARkamJx]

>last panel

 

[Firemorfox]

What a bizarre thing to say. Do you read a lot of manga adaptations where the characters repeats the exact same thing several times in a single chapter? Do you think this is just standard behavior for a manga adaptation for a light novel?

It seems you misunderstood what I said in my post so I'll try to be more clear here: I'm not complaining about the writing quality of this manga in comparison to the light novel (which for all I know could also have been poorly written at this part of the story), my complaint was about how this manga was getting worse compared to itself from earlier chapters.

Yes, repetition happens a lot in LN too like you say, but because the context that is missing in the manga adaptation, has several paragraphs (or sometimes an entire chapter or two) on different factions the manga often skips past.

Any adaptation tends to cut off context. I am only pointing that out.

 

[Wizardrone]

thanks for chapter

is the author or rather the artist testing our patience?

 

[Pen3]

Why havent the bad guys learn to not kidnap lolis? It never ends well for them.

 

[Cpl_Facehugger]

I kinda like this Shaft arc better, ngl

Yeah. Some weirdly drawn shota-like kid is boring. But Batman in an offbrand nanosuit? Much cooler.

 

[RWorld]

I'm not sure shouting at a man one floor below you is such a good idea for infiltration.

 

[BowlOfMisoSoup]

I kinda like this Shaft arc better, ngl

Yeah, and if they stick with this design I would have no problem at all