Maou-sama, Retry! R - Vol. 6 Ch. 30

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This was done in 2 days of TS 'ing, and damn, cleaning and redrawing it was a bit of a pain this chapter.

Anyhow, I rarely look at the comments section, except when I'm soon to upload the next chapter.
Don't count on it that I'll see this thread.
 
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"Wait, let's talk!"

Why is it always the characters who never allow others to talk who say that? If you live by the sword, you die by the sword.

Man, it was satisfying seeing that stupid tophat kid get put in his place. Shame he left with little to no injuries though.
It's not his time yet. One villain at a time. It'll come. I hope.
 
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@DevilBro559 good job there, but if i'm going to nitpick, the baka baka part would be more accurate as "ba~ka! ba~ka!" beside RAW reason usually baka in mocking tone have the ba dragged on, maybe also use slightly annoying font to emphasis the mocking tone even more?, though if you ask me for "fully translated experience"... i don't know, translate it as "idiot! idiot!" doesn't have the spirit of the RAW in my opinion, but translate it to "stu~pid! stu~pid!" are kinda... stupid, but this is very minor things, so again good job there

also thanks for proving my expectation about you wrong, and make me feel bad about it, i apologize for being distrusting and rude at chapter 28 comments, you're actually one of the better MTL, since you shown yourself you're willing to improve
though some "it's free! no critics!" cheerleader/hugbox probably won't satisfied with what i type above
 
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Based off the novel, I was expecting something more like FGO's Nero's NP instead of this tiny wrestling ring.
 
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@DevilBro559 good job there, but if i'm going to nitpick, the baka baka part would be more accurate as "ba~ka! ba~ka!" beside RAW reason usually baka in mocking tone have the ba dragged on, maybe also use slightly annoying font to emphasis the mocking tone even more?, though if you ask me for "fully translated experience"... i don't know, translate it as "idiot! idiot!" doesn't have the spirit of the RAW in my opinion, but translate it to "stu~pid! stu~pid!" are kinda... stupid, but this is very minor things, so again good job there

also thanks for proving my expectation about you wrong, and make me feel bad about it, i apologize for being distrusting and rude at chapter 28 comments, you're actually one of the better MTL, since you shown yourself you're willing to improve
though some "it's free! no critics!" cheerleader/hugbox probably won't satisfied with what i type above
Nah bro, constructive criticism is always valid. Free or not, if you say something in positive way, it is more acceptable than being rude.
 
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holy shit
there is no good reason for this fantasy weird slice of life to go so HARD, on god.
 
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That's why the MC fears her; she's not a generic mid-boss NPC from his game like the Doctor and Soldier, she's a unkillable yandere Essential NPC who was directly in charge of one of the primary features of the game. She's almost an Admin herself.
 
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Do NOT, under any circumstances, mess with Hakuto's girls. They are all batshit crazy. Like, a snake eating its own tail while watching Will Smith slap his own mama at the Oscars while that crazy little arsonist girl takes another selfie while you read this comment, crazy.

Also, just my opinion, but the next girl is even crazier better!
 
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Fuck, this shit goes HARD! I really love that scene between the MC and Hakuto. Does this mean he'll be more demonic while still keeping some of his kindness? (That's a rhetorical question, pls don't spoil me)

And damn, you really did a great job on this one, cuz it doesn't feel like an MTL.
 

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