Maou-sama, Retry! R - Vol. 6 Ch. 30

[Fuew12]

Man, it was satisfying seeing that stupid tophat kid get put in his place. Shame he left with little to no injuries though.
Even more satisfying is seeing a trash mob accidentally wander into the final boss arena. Sucks to be Organ's dad.

you know about that shitty brat

Spoiler: its might be fate

in future Akane will end up with dying will of some mercenary group that getting tortured by that shitty brat since the mercenary leader have same type armor that Olga father had, more ironic after Hakuto kill Olga dad he gave the armor to Akane pretty much set up for shitty brat getting trashed by Akane in future since that Brat need the armor for his reason

 

[Gimmy]

I AM THOU
THOU ART I

 

[Key_news]

How many persona does he has actually ?

 

[HDMI1]

How many persona does he has actually ?

Three: the original Game Dev MC, Kunai the Demon Lord (suppressed until now), and Zero the Dragon (gained control during first transformation until the MC got strong enough to restrict the personality).

 

[Pumpki]

Ah didn't notice it was MTL until people pointed it out. Well done, thanks for the translation! Only thing I'd say is that "run or hide" sounds more normal to me me than "hide or run"

 

[DevilBro559]

@DevilBro559 good job there, but if i'm going to nitpick, the baka baka part would be more accurate as "ba~ka! ba~ka!" beside RAW reason usually baka in mocking tone have the ba dragged on, maybe also use slightly annoying font to emphasis the mocking tone even more?, though if you ask me for "fully translated experience"...

Okay, I'll change it by tomorrow.

You shown yourself you're willing to improve

Well I am a pacifist, and I want to improve the things I like doing (like reading manga)

Nah bro, constructive criticism is always valid. Free or not, if you say something in positive way, it is more acceptable than being rude.

Yes yes, its always welcome. Even if it a bit rude, as long as it's logical it can be used to improve.

And damn, you really did a great job on this one, cuz it doesn't feel like an MTL.

Yeah, there were some issues in the MTL, like 《Field: Electrical Hall》, so I referenced the Light Novel and saw that it was 《Field: Electric Colleseum》.

 

[DevilBro559]

Only thing I'd say is that "run or hide" sounds more normal to me me than "hide or run"

Okay will change it soon 👍

 

[Amariithynar]

Okay will change it soon 👍

Great job mate. Glad to see you're so willing to take constructive criticism.

 

[ForTheJerusalem]

Why did organ have to cover up her belly and chest? Why?

 

[DevilBro559]

All Corrections are Done

If i'm going to nitpick, the baka baka part would be more accurate as "ba~ka! ba~ka!" beside RAW reason usually baka in mocking tone have the ba dragged on, maybe also use slightly annoying font to emphasis the mocking tone even more?, though if you ask me for "fully translated experience"... i don't know, translate it as "idiot! idiot!" doesn't have the spirit of the RAW in my opinion, but translate it to "stu~pid! stu~pid!" are kinda... stupid, but this is very minor things.

Only thing I'd say is that "run or hide" sounds more normal to me me than "hide or run"

And one from my Discord:
Tzeentch:
Ch30 p3 "Your wrong" > "You're wrong"

 

[TokenOtaku]

NGL, this manga has been feeling random in recent chapters.

 

[Intern098]

NGL, this manga has been feeling random in recent chapters.

Might be due to changes from the WN to LN, they diverge after the part where they visit the dungeon in rookie.

 

[NishaAzalea]

Out of all the enemies so far Kale has to be hands down my fave.

He is just fun and good comic relief 🤣

 

[GridLite]

guy's leg was cut off at page 26 then was instantly healed in page 30 lmao what

 

[Intern098]

guy's leg was cut off at page 26 then was instantly healed in page 30 lmao what

Might have been an error; in the LN, he started to fly because he was missing a leg.

 

[GridLite]

Might have been an error; in the LN, he started to fly because he was missing a leg.

yes, it's gonna be an error since i don't think that shitling ever had enough hurt experience with that OP armor after all. since he got the armor, he threw the idea that there might be a chance he'll get hurt so no healing abilities or potions whatsoever

 

[ZelousR2]

 

[Y0UR_U53R]

 

[thanakij]

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