The name of the Main Character feels off when one has read the fan translated webnovel which has it as 'Welner Zeavert' before the mangas fan translation of 'Verna Tesafert'...espically when one has heard of 'Verna' more as a female name than a males.
There is of course some differences, I certainly don't remember them having a certain female commander in these early chapters...so I'm wondering on some things, but can't say it as I would likely spoil from what I know of the webnovel version.
As it is, I'd say it's a typical story, but not a bad one to waste your time looking over.