Martial Peak - Ch. 43 - The Tea is Good, The Server Even Better

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Great. Now both of the sisters want him unless she is a really good actor
 
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I thought it a possibility, but I didn't actually think it would happen. Lol should have known better.
 
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i wonder what she wants to do? maybe like... play catch, or ride a bike... wow she should really be more specific
 
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"oh ya i want to talk with you about something" will this thing be said?
 
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Chinese-story at its peak: completely forgetting who the MC is, and what were his initial intentions to begin with, and just ending up writing something random "because it seems funny / interesting / sexy".

If the MC at least started off the encounter by asserting he just came to ask for a business-favor, and was then consequently played with by the twin's "enticing charm", that'd have been perfectly fine.
But instead, the author just had to completely remove the MC's agency, just so he'd be able to shoelace another girl into the story.
Writing 1 to 3 chapters a day ends up that way, I guess. Better keep browsing.
 
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Jap stories having their own trope-shenanigans is a different story, I was commenting on how it's not unusual for Chinese stories to be utterly side-tracked with flight of fancies.
And I don't recall a lot about this story, god forbid yet another random thing, but I can say that it was widely apparent that the MC went into the room with the intention to gain a favor, and ended up becoming a completely different person, who does completely different things. And the only reason I can see as to why anyone would do that to their character, is to just write up an ecchi scene.

That is to say, the MC is flirty not to gain "business advantage". Common courtesy has its limits. He not only was flirty just to be flirty, the MC was also strangely sexually submissive, shy and meek all of a sudden -- because the author is horny and has to write something that'd sell. He then proceeded in following chapters to suddenly make the MC this genius observer who "actually did it all on purpose to gauge his foe". Of course he did.
That's my take on it.
 

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