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I prefer this to the gags of old. I was also thrown off by the first chapter if only for the fact that she played it off too perfectly. It's one thing if she was confronted by something minor, but she was staring straight at the face of ugly and it was played off as a joke. In retrospect, crappy initial intro chapters, but I do hope she grows further from here.
Also, author needs to lay off the twists. I consider a good ratio to be 85|15, but that doesn't just depend on the quantity, but also the quality. Redeeming or condemning a character is usually very heavy (so the vet really ought to be a true-blue good guy). The last twist with the morphing ghost was really good on its own though.
Also, author needs to lay off the twists. I consider a good ratio to be 85|15, but that doesn't just depend on the quantity, but also the quality. Redeeming or condemning a character is usually very heavy (so the vet really ought to be a true-blue good guy). The last twist with the morphing ghost was really good on its own though.