- Joined
- Feb 24, 2020
- Messages
- 96
it was an ok read, not great or special at all. mostly annoying that even though he was in the military he somehow couldnt fight whatsoever which makes zero sense, and also the lack of thought put into the whole
he just brushes it aside as if it wont happen again, and yes the chances are slim, but that doesnt mean its not impossible and the lack of thought of such things like because of an app system he knows next to nothing about doesnt plan or prepare for possible things such as information being bought or tracking of other users, after all, it has anything you can imagine so why didnt he think of preparing but instead just brushed it aside like it didnt matter? its just bad writing i guess especially coming from an ex military. also the story stalls alot, found that kinda annoying, and the time period, there is no sense of time, there is but there isnt. only every once in awhile will it talk about 3 months passed and so and so made this much, or a month has gone by but thats all and its only after the fact and then somehow its already been 1-2 years.... back to the stalling around ch 32ish it stalls and nothing interesting really happens. sad
after finding out about other users, instead of powering himself up or planning for when other users come to him or he runs into another