Personally, I love that you managed to translate her like this. You make a persuasive case for why it makes sense, and I find it refreshing to encounter a character with such a strong voice - even if it's the voice of a degenerate sperg memer. I'd love to see you make a serious attempt at translating different dialects. I was one of the ones who quite liked the scottish demon, and while you certainly didn't, I'm now convinced you could have done it better.