My Intern Bullied Me Again! - Vol. 7 Ch. 91 - If I Don't Do This, It'll Be Even Harder to Clean This Place Up

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anyone else feel like the joke in this chapter are not land very well, it is kinda copy and paste of what come before.
This now read like soneone else try to recreate author so it just repeated what it done before instead of the original creative doing it. or author just simple run out of juice
 
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anyone else feel like the joke in this chapter are not land very well, it is kinda copy and paste of what come before.
This now read like soneone else try to recreate author so it just repeated what it done before instead of the original creative doing it. or author just simple run out of juice
I think it's more of a set up chapter. The problem is that the author resolved the main pair's relationship too well in the first arc, which would work as a self contained story like you've talked about. The best we can get with them now is miniarcs (eg, the youtube celebrity or vacation arcs) or forced drama. Their job is to sit at a cubicle, so it's not like we can see them cooperating for anything interesting.

Some elements (skeptical mom showing up out of nowhere, Li Wenjing discipline, Lu Meihe job offer, etc) are introduced so that there can be an arc between them again. Given the cover art, the arc may culminate Lu Meihe marrying Li Wenjing when she gets back.

In between that we get some jokes that are references to earlier parts of the story. Maybe this is because the marriage arc is supposed to be a "serious" arc, so the author doesn't want to make the mom or cobra mentor too zany. Throwing in a few callback jokes fills the void.

I am still liking this series, but series like this often go off the rails around chapter 100 and start getting boring. It sounds like it may already be there for you. Others of us are still liking it, but most important characters are paired up at this point. I wouldn't mind it if, post marriage, the story ended and we got a new series from this this author.

Though who actually is the author? It just says "Lily Club", which supposedly is internally produced yuri bilibili comics. Is the artist the real author? ... Hang on, it says this series is "completed" on manga dex. Maybe it really ends with them getting married. And there's this other series by the artist:

Rookie cop and a genius thief - two outcasts from opposite worlds are forced to team up to catch the criminal mastermind.
One’s a hot-headed rookie shunned by her precinct. The other’s a brilliant thief ostracized by her peers. Thrown together against their will, they soon realize… The person they’re chasing might not be as dangerous as the reflection staring back at them.

When the long arm of justice meets a shapeshifting trickster, this mission starts to spiral into something no one expected…

- Heartbeat Alert Pursuit Order


I don't think this has an English translation, but maybe we have something to look forward to if someone eventually picks it up.
 
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Though who actually is the author? It just says "Lily Club", which supposedly is internally produced yuri bilibili comics. Is the artist the real author? ... Hang on, it says this series is "completed" on manga dex. Maybe it really ends with them getting married. And there's this other series by the artist:
Kalata is both the author and artist. Lily Club is the publisher but since Mangadex doesn't have a section for the publisher they often get listed under the author slot for whatever reason.

Also L1v's group recently picked up the authors other series
 
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I think it's more of a set up chapter. The problem is that the author resolved the main pair's relationship too well in the first arc, which would work as a self contained story like you've talked about. The best we can get with them now is miniarcs (eg, the youtube celebrity or vacation arcs) or forced drama. Their job is to sit at a cubicle, so it's not like we can see them cooperating for anything interesting.

Some elements (skeptical mom showing up out of nowhere, Li Wenjing discipline, Lu Meihe job offer, etc) are introduced so that there can be an arc between them again. Given the cover art, the arc may culminate Lu Meihe marrying Li Wenjing when she gets back.

In between that we get some jokes that are references to earlier parts of the story. Maybe this is because the marriage arc is supposed to be a "serious" arc, so the author doesn't want to make the mom or cobra mentor too zany. Throwing in a few callback jokes fills the void.

I am still liking this series, but series like this often go off the rails around chapter 100 and start getting boring. It sounds like it may already be there for you. Others of us are still liking it, but most important characters are paired up at this point. I wouldn't mind it if, post marriage, the story ended and we got a new series from this this author.

Though who actually is the author? It just says "Lily Club", which supposedly is internally produced yuri bilibili comics. Is the artist the real author? ... Hang on, it says this series is "completed" on manga dex. Maybe it really ends with them getting married. And there's this other series by the artist:



- Heartbeat Alert Pursuit Order


I don't think this has an English translation, but maybe we have something to look forward to if someone eventually picks it up.
not talking about the plot and what not. here i just talking about the punchline and funny moment.
 
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Kalata is both the author and artist. Lily Club is the publisher but since Mangadex doesn't have a section for the publisher they often get listed under the author slot for whatever reason.

Also L1v's group recently picked up the authors other series
Great news and info, thank you.
not talking about the plot and what not. here i just talking about the punchline and funny moment.
That's what I mean though, I think they are recycling it due to plot reasons. Specifically that Li Wenjing's mom and the mentor are "serious" characters are meant to inspire character growth, culminating in the marriage. Those characters got almost the whole focus this chapter. The jokes we get are references to earlier events, like to how the whole story got started due to them meeting in a bathroom stall, because that takes no additional setup.

Usually the humor in this series comes from some type of conflict, which often comes from a character's unresolved need or unresolved emotional issue, leading to over the top hijinks between the characters. At the end they overcome it and grow as a person.

This is hard for the main pair at this point, because they are so self actualized already now. The other characters could generate comparatively more jokes than the main pair, but now they are doing well too. The only one with deeply unresolved emotional issues that comes to mind is Li Wenjing's brother, who still doesn't value himself or his happiness enough.
 
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OH INSTANT WATERMELON, aight lemme put me glasses on I have some thoughts
Ok so firstly, the shape is nice ...that's it, seriously this is the worst watermelon I've ever seen in Yuri yet, to be fair I've examined some damn good and unique watermelon time, but like... I can see how you took the shortcuts you copied the exact same png from Google with no variation for each slice, I mean I wouldn't have as much of a problem with it if there was anything out into it but bro, the textures dont even aline and I can see clearly with my own two eyes how it was just copied over, shall I repeat again how it was copied over cause it was? I mean it gets obvious when you look at the seeds, you couldn't pull out a different png? Add some variation? Move the pngs TO THE SIDE, ALINE THE TEXTURES EVEN SLIGHTLY AND, thinker outlines would probably help hide the misalignment...

Ok im through... Let us continue- WHAT IS THAT!? WHY IS IT JUST- look I get perspective and all that, it's far away now, and you can tell it's the watermelon cause of the color but... It's not even the same shade, like you could draw some quick green and white stripes at the bottom, heighten the saturation, just a few speeds I just... This atrocity has put me in an atrocious mood I can't even...
Moving on for reals now

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I'm sorry, are the pngs in the side of the slices the SAME IMAGE, just trasmutated over!? That's three seeds each STILL, IN THE EXACT SAME PLACES??!? Yeah no I'm sorry, moving on

More like wet and cardboard, ah yes the perfect snack... I am not moving on am I...

Worry not, the older did not do the pursing so its ok

Fools it's a work environment no shit you gotta keep your flirting on the down low, it's a work- ah whatever

Ah yes lead it into the next chapter... I think those blasted melons took up all my brain power for the chapter dammit
Have a nice day, you best see better melons at a different date anyone possibly reading
 

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