My Maid, Miss Kishi - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - The Gift Strategy!

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Well done, big improvement in quality from the first chapter. Only one small mistake I spotted, in the last page "handle 'your' the baggage". I think the font you chose for this chapter is perfect too.

Looking forward to you continuing this
 
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Thank you so much @Seratalrakib ♡ you're doing great sweetie. might I add, you have good taste~

The only mistake I noticed last time in Ch1 is on p9 I think "give" is misspelled as "guve" in the top left panel. Really minor detail, I think its nbd if you leave it.
 
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page5: "amoung" ---> "among"

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UPDATE

Thank you for pointing out the mistakes! I have duly corrected them and updated chapter 2! Please do help me in any future chapters as well! Hope my mistakes haven’t hindered your enjoyment of the manga tho!
 
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It's kind of strange the dude is so mega successful in business, yet is still like that when dealing with Kishi.
 
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she wanted to go with YOU and YOU to carry the bag not someone else
get the clue mannnn T^T
ah you two are so cute
 

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