The author throws away good ideas and character process, rushes the story a tad much and creates extra drama in scenarios that makes no sense to have them.
He has been fighting for 7 years for god sake. A person that did that and hadn't mentally broken down by that point would know at least not to lower their damn guard during mid combat.
I don't want to be killjoy for those that enjoy this. I hope ye do enjoy it. But there are just too many plot holes and inconsistencies here for me to be to enjoy this. I feel like I am reading story stuff I would write 8 years back and it his hurting me on the inside.
She would never have reached him in time. From the balcony, to a horse and to the enemy before he had killed him. That is the kind of mistake in spacing that I would bloody make. And I am subpar to average at writing.
I do hope the author improves after this. Because these past 4 chapters have been largely painful to watch (no armor on the soldiers, leaving the defense of the castle etc etc)