NTREVENGE - Ch. 34

[MangaDex]

 

[Yaboyhg80]

Mods, subject the MC to horrors beyond his comprehension

 

[Litreara]

This confirms what I said about chapter 30 regarding Azusa's appearance:

Azusa isn't eating well and shouldn't have looked healthy in chapter 30. The whole story is stupid and doesn't make sense, which is why I think the author, the artist, and the editor need to pay attention to these small details that break the suspension of disbelief and make the story even more inconceivable. The editorial work in Young Magazine has never been exceptional, but recently it has shown a notable lack of quality.

Thanks for the chapter!

 

[BlackHoxton]

This confirms what I said about chapter 30 regarding Azusa's appearance:

Azusa isn't eating well and shouldn't have looked healthy in chapter 30. The whole story is stupid and doesn't make sense, which is why I think the author, the artist, and the editor need to pay attention to these small details that break the suspension of disbelief and make the story even more inconceivable. The editorial work in Young Magazine has never been exceptional, but recently it has shown a notable lack of quality.

Thanks for the chapter!

She is supplanting regular food by eating the bullies sperm of course.

 

[vannn]

Whose the villain again?

 

[MiguelH224]

I'm not about to be gaslit into thinking MC still cares about Azusa, we all know that ship has sailed a long time ago




I'm praying for MC's downfall

 

[Robfaw]

Starting to lose interest. I wonder if the author is happy with this. Like is this lamer version of Confinement King what he wanted to write originally?

 

[Jakeh24]

Starting to lose interest. I wonder if the author is happy with this. Like is this lamer version of Confinement King what he wanted to write originally?

I lost interest the same time the mangaka seemingly did 20 chapters ago. This really fucking sucks now

 

[Drifter]

The main is developing feelings for his mindbroken slave? It sure does feel like he has completely forgotten about his friend.

 

[Schernobyl]

MC is feeling bad for the girl he mind broke and doesnt understand that she wants to be his now after the first sexual encounter. She literally thought you had to love/marry someone before sex. Atleast confinement king MC loves the girls once they are his...
Azusa needs to stab the dude and save herself.

 

[HayashidaYuki]

It sure does feel like he has completely forgotten about his friend.

She (supposedly) locked herself in her room, he message her sometime (receive no respone), the succubus supposedly keeping a watch on her, but the succubus never reported to him that she sneaks up to meet the bully(probably she enjoy the drama).

 

[altmaria]

This confirms what I said about chapter 30 regarding Azusa's appearance:

Azusa isn't eating well and shouldn't have looked healthy in chapter 30. The whole story is stupid and doesn't make sense, which is why I think the author, the artist, and the editor need to pay attention to these small details that break the suspension of disbelief and make the story even more inconceivable. The editorial work in Young Magazine has never been exceptional, but recently it has shown a notable lack of quality.

Thanks for the chapter!

You expect way too much from a sex fantasy projection manga.

 

[theshet]

Whose the villain again?

The sin of lust and pride I guess

 

[lolfacesayshi]

I'll never not cringe when I see "haizz" used in manga translations in the year 2024

of all the ways to denote a sigh, why did it have to be the cursed 2010s chatroom haizz?

 

[0Zion]

Even the other girl is doing more progress saving Azusa. Bruh. Here we have the "MC" fucking the bully and acting lovely dovey and conflicted.

Why am I being so stressed that Asuza is not yet saved is being subjected to further horrors?
Like he could've easily revealed to Asuza he has powers now to comfort her that they can take revenge and that no more harm will fall upon her but nooooooo. She gets blackmailed and mindfucked.

 

[jrocker]

Hopefully with this he actually learns the truth finally about Azusa. If she even realized that was her v. thinking the bully is just doing the same thing. This one for me is getting worse as Azusa suffers more for no reason, the Mc becomes a bully (I'd be fine if he did it AFTER helping her), and nothing in the plot actually happens except our MC becomes happier with his life.

 

[Litreara]

You expect way too much from a sex fantasy projection manga.

Sure, it’s a sex fantasy projection manga, but that doesn’t excuse completely disregarding the internal logic of its own world. Even within a fantasy, there needs to be some level of consistency to keep readers engaged. For instance, in chapter 11, Azusa is explicitly shown in a bad state:

So, when she suddenly looks perfectly healthy in chapter 30 despite supposedly not eating, it feels like outright negligence. It’s not about expecting realism; it’s about expecting the story to at least follow its own rules. In fact, it would’ve been even more tragic and impactful if she had continued to look unwell. The shock of seeing her deteriorate over time would have added emotional weight, making her situation feel more dire. But by showing her perfectly healthy out of nowhere, it undercuts any tension the story was trying to build. If the creators can’t be bothered to maintain even that level of consistency, it shows a blatant disregard for quality. Fantasy or not, the author, artist, and editor should care about these details, especially if they want readers to stay invested. Expecting some effort isn’t asking for too much.

 

[animan095]

It feels so weird that i know the Gyaru deserves to be treated badly, but the way the MC acts is exactly the role of an abusive boyfriend so it makes me feel pity for her.

 

[rspkers]

We're really just hate reading this manga at this point, aren't we?

The MC is completely irredeemable. He mindbroke gyaru-chan into being an innocent slave and is confused when she's sad that he's treating her like shit. She doesn't know she was a bully and thinks she's having lovey dovey sex with her precious bf. So how is this even payback? What's the point if she isn't in the same frame of mind anymore? All you're doing is abusing an "innocent" girl yourself. You're literally the same as the bullies, bro. This author is retarded, lol. Needs to axe this and just focus on confinement king.

 

[savris]

Haizzz... why do I get the feeling that with how four-eyes is flippant with the girl's feelings (or atleast show a modicum that he cares even if he doesn't mean it), he's likely to get stabbed by the overeager black haired-one or the gyaru in which he keeps giving the stick but never the carrot?? 🤷‍♂️