NTREVENGE - Ch. 34

[MiguelH224]

Starting to lose interest. I wonder if the author is happy with this. Like is this lamer version of Confinement King what he wanted to write originally?

Confinement King? Don't think I'm familiar with that one

 

[MiguelH224]

Sure, it’s a sex fantasy projection manga, but that doesn’t excuse completely disregarding the internal logic of its own world. Even within a fantasy, there needs to be some level of consistency to keep readers engaged. For instance, in chapter 11, Azusa is explicitly shown in a bad state:

So, when she suddenly looks perfectly healthy in chapter 30 despite supposedly not eating, it feels like outright negligence. It’s not about expecting realism; it’s about expecting the story to at least follow its own rules. In fact, it would’ve been even more tragic and impactful if she had continued to look unwell. The shock of seeing her deteriorate over time would have added emotional weight, making her situation feel more dire. But by showing her perfectly healthy out of nowhere, it undercuts any tension the story was trying to build. If the creators can’t be bothered to maintain even that level of consistency, it shows a blatant disregard for quality. Fantasy or not, the author, artist, and editor should care about these details, especially if they want readers to stay invested. Expecting some effort isn’t asking for too much.

Preach that shit!!!!

 

[alex13sk8]

Hopefully with this he actually learns the truth finally about Azusa. If she even realized that was her v. thinking the bully is just doing the same thing. This one for me is getting worse as Azusa suffers more for no reason, the Mc becomes a bully (I'd be fine if he did it AFTER helping her), and nothing in the plot actually happens except our MC becomes happier with his life.

the protagonist's objective is just for what happened to his childhood friend, he is taking revenge for himself, for what he went through at the hands of bullies, as his assistant is a demon of lust, he can only do things this way

 

[Robfaw]

Confinement King? Don't think I'm familiar with that one

The author of this manga wrote a web novel, which also got a manga adaptation, named Confinement King. The premise is exactly the same as NTREVENGE, but I think most would agree the execution is much better in Confinement King.

Which is extra annoying bc the novel is on hiatus, probably bc the author is working on this instead.

 

[Judaskiss]

Sure, it’s a sex fantasy projection manga, but that doesn’t excuse completely disregarding the internal logic of its own world. Even within a fantasy, there needs to be some level of consistency to keep readers engaged. For instance, in chapter 11, Azusa is explicitly shown in a bad state:

So, when she suddenly looks perfectly healthy in chapter 30 despite supposedly not eating, it feels like outright negligence. It’s not about expecting realism; it’s about expecting the story to at least follow its own rules. In fact, it would’ve been even more tragic and impactful if she had continued to look unwell. The shock of seeing her deteriorate over time would have added emotional weight, making her situation feel more dire. But by showing her perfectly healthy out of nowhere, it undercuts any tension the story was trying to build. If the creators can’t be bothered to maintain even that level of consistency, it shows a blatant disregard for quality. Fantasy or not, the author, artist, and editor should care about these details, especially if they want readers to stay invested. Expecting some effort isn’t asking for too much.

Pretty sure that’s some random girl, and not Azusa.

 

[Litreara]

Pretty sure that’s some random girl, and not Azusa.

Pretty sure you're wrong.

Pages 18 and 19 from Chapter 11:

 

[Kushikime]

Thanks for the chapter

 

[nueee]

mc is a cuck, a cuck.

 

[The_H_Guy]

Whose the villain again?

The MC, if he would do things right.

 

[InfernoIce7630]

Why not just translate characters sighing as like "haah" or something. The "haizzz" is really weird.

 

[Karamru]

Why do I get the feeling this gyaru chick is going to let herself get knocked up by the MC, since she believes all these childish things about relationships and probably thinks sex is only for procreation or something.

 

[Chipp12]

Hopefully with this he actually learns the truth finally about Azusa.

Still nothing so far. The bully will find out that MC and his sister are close thanks to Miku in chapter 38 tho

 

[alex13sk8]

Still nothing so far. The bully will find out that MC and his sister are close thanks to Miku in chapter 38 tho

Spoiler

It was Asmod who asked her to do this

 

[EchoGirl]

"Haaizz" does the mangaka really write it like that or is the z just a translator artistic license on how they're sighing

 

[InfernoIce7630]

"Haaizz" does the mangaka really write it like that or is the z just a translator artistic license on how they're sighing

The mangaka writes it like most others do as just "はあ" which can be translated as like "haah". I don't understand the whole "haizzz" translation lol.

 

[EchoGirl]

The mangaka writes it like most others do as just "はあ" which can be translated as like "haah". I don't understand the whole "haizzz" translation lol.

I guess it's a translation quirk, i'd let it slide more if it was a 'gyaru' slang doing it like "meccha kawaii" tl'd into "totes adorbs" versus the MC unless the tl group is non-native to Eng and it's slang to them or so