Ok I've published the first one there but still not sure whether it's a good idea since navigating the thread that already has 7 pages doesn't seem to be that comfortable.
NTREVENGE - Ch. 45
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Nice, thanks @Chipp12.
Seems like a detail that should be in the main storyline instead of optional content, but more or less explains everything.
Honestly dreading Asuza ending up in the hell harem. You know it’s coming, she’s just not gonna make it out. Still have hope Azuka is final girl though.
I think that by finishing the revenge against Mitsuki or whatever her fate will be, Sakuraba is capable of breaking up with her, or he will keep a double life, and about Asuza only the future will tell what will happen to her, will Mitsuki call Sakuraba to that room in the building to watch Asuza or will he film it and send it to him?
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Man... You made me curious, so I went and read the fourth one... It's absolutely disturbing and repulsive. No punishment is enough for Mitsuru. I hope he rots in a hellish prison where he gets raped every day.
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Oh god now I'm curious. What happens? Is it spoilers beyond the raws?
These are extra stories that come in each volume of the manga.
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So, each volume of the manga has an extra chapter written in a novel format. Chipp12 is translating them and posting them in the manga’s main thread on the forum. He’s already done this for volumes one and two.
As you may have seen, Chipp12 mentioned that the extra chapter in volume 4 is about Azusa. I was curious, so I read it myself using MTL... and, well, it’s a very unpleasant and repulsive read.
The chapter is a very graphic account from Azusa’s point of view, describing the hopeless cycle she’s trapped in—being raped by Mitsuru and photographed by him.
The first account is of when she tried to kill him by stabbing him. She failed and only managed to cut his face (see chapter 19). Mitsuru disarms her and punches her in the face several times, leaving her covered in blood. After that, Mitsuru says something like: “Look what you made me do after I was nice to you! Your only good feature is your cute face, and now it’s all swollen.” He then puts a plastic bag over her head and rapes her repeatedly until the next morning, while she can barely breathe because of the bag and her own blood.
The second account is about when Mitsuru takes her to the Inoue building and forces her to perform oral sex on him. She’s clearly reluctant, so Mitsuru gets rough—he throat-fucks her until she vomits, then says something like: “That’s disgusting. Have you no shame?” There’s also a long, graphic, and unpleasant description of Mitsuru’s penis—how it feels in her mouth, the texture, the taste, the pubic hair brushing against her nose, and so on.
The second account kind of broke my suspension of disbelief. It makes absolutely no sense that Mitsuru would put his penis in the mouth of a girl who had tried to stab him. She could’ve easily bitten it off—and he would’ve bled to death. You could argue that she was already fully submissive at that point, but even so, it still feels insane.
But anyway, like I said, the whole thing is a disturbing, unpleasant, and repulsive read.
As you may have seen, Chipp12 mentioned that the extra chapter in volume 4 is about Azusa. I was curious, so I read it myself using MTL... and, well, it’s a very unpleasant and repulsive read.
The chapter is a very graphic account from Azusa’s point of view, describing the hopeless cycle she’s trapped in—being raped by Mitsuru and photographed by him.
⚠️ CONTENT WARNING ⚠️
This section contains explicit and potentially disturbing material. Reader discretion is strongly advised.The first account is of when she tried to kill him by stabbing him. She failed and only managed to cut his face (see chapter 19). Mitsuru disarms her and punches her in the face several times, leaving her covered in blood. After that, Mitsuru says something like: “Look what you made me do after I was nice to you! Your only good feature is your cute face, and now it’s all swollen.” He then puts a plastic bag over her head and rapes her repeatedly until the next morning, while she can barely breathe because of the bag and her own blood.
The second account is about when Mitsuru takes her to the Inoue building and forces her to perform oral sex on him. She’s clearly reluctant, so Mitsuru gets rough—he throat-fucks her until she vomits, then says something like: “That’s disgusting. Have you no shame?” There’s also a long, graphic, and unpleasant description of Mitsuru’s penis—how it feels in her mouth, the texture, the taste, the pubic hair brushing against her nose, and so on.
The second account kind of broke my suspension of disbelief. It makes absolutely no sense that Mitsuru would put his penis in the mouth of a girl who had tried to stab him. She could’ve easily bitten it off—and he would’ve bled to death. You could argue that she was already fully submissive at that point, but even so, it still feels insane.
But anyway, like I said, the whole thing is a disturbing, unpleasant, and repulsive read.
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Fucking christ that's foul. Forced castration and torture would be letting him off easy.
is the description eroticised? Or is it her being disgusted? I swear to god if this author has the gang rape happen I'm out at this point. It's just pure sadism
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People are thinking that the one who is capable of suffering this is Azuka and not Asuza
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Like I said, no punishment would ever be enough for Mitsuru. I honestly hope he rots in some hellish prison where he gets raped every single day.
I didn’t find it erotic at all. To me, it read more like a bleak and painful depiction of what Azusa is enduring.
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Chapter 51 - The Devil's Deeds
The chapter begins with Hina and Sekido questioning Miku in a bathroom at school.
Hina: Miku… What are you planning?
Miku: AH… THAT’S NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS!
Sekido: It is important!!
Hina: The reason Asuka-chan asked me for your number… Sakuraba (MC) asked me to find it out—from you.
Sekido: DON’T GET THE WRONG IDEA. IF SAKURABA-KUN’S OKAY WITH IT, I CAN PAY YOU BACK FOR THE EARRINGS FROM THAT TIME. DO YOU WANT ME TO DO IT RIGHT HERE, RIGHT NOW?
Miku: Haah. Fine.
Sekido: Seriously… You should’ve just been honest and told us everything from the start. You’re wasting our time.
Miku smiles devilishly as she's about to tell them.
At the apartment, Hina and Sekido tell the MC what Miku told them.
MC: So... Asmodeus is using Takeuchi-san (Miku) to push Asuka-chan into doing something?
Hina: Yeah... Apparently, she already knows. They told Asuka-chan about Mitsuru raping Miku and Hayami-san (Azusa). They told her that if she doesn’t want Sakuraba to hate her, she has to do something about her brother—...
Hina stops talking when she sees the scary look on the MC’s face.
Hina and Sekido: ¿!HII!?
MC: ...I'm leaving.
Sekido: AH... Sakuraba-kun.
MC activates his teleport marker to head home.
Hina and Sekido: Haah.
Sekido: Sakuraba-kun... He was really angry.
Hina: Yeah. I’m going home too. What about you...?
Sekido: I’ll stay... Sakuraba-kun might come back.
At home, MC finds Asmodeus in his room.
Asmodeus: Oh... Welcome back. Why the scary face?
MC: What are you trying to do?
Asmodeus: What do you mean...? Ah! This is about Asuka-chan, right?
MC: I’VE ALREADY SEDUCED ASUKA! I TOOK HER FROM TAKESHIGE (Mitsuru)!
Asmodeus: Yeah... And so?
MC: NOW ALL THAT'S LEFT IS TO SHOW TAKESHIGE...
Asmodeus: Letting Long Hair get a little depressed won’t change anything, you know? Although, Azusa-chan will probably suffer even more than she already is...
MC: Azusa? Even though she’s locked up now, when I’m done with this, Azusa will be able to—...
Asmodeus thinks, “Ah… that’s right. I blocked his thoughts so he couldn’t think past that.” Then, she snaps her fingers, lifting the spell she had placed on MC.
Asmodeus: Long Hair keeps calling Azusa-chan out so he can keep raping her. What are you saying, darling?
MC thinks, “Huh...? But Azusa’s locked up.”
MC then grabs his head in pain. “UUGH.”
MC thinks: “That was a possibility. If it’s Takeshige (Mitsuru), who could no longer touch Takeuchi-san (Miku)... Then of course he’d threaten and go after another girl. So then… why!? Why did it never even cross my mind!? Why!?”
Asmodeus watches with an awkward smile as MC clutches his head.
Asmodeus: I told Asuka-chan... “Your brother is raping your boyfriend’s childhood friend... It’s really brave of you to be willing to condemn your own brother just so your boyfriend doesn’t hate you.”
Asmodeus: Azusa-chan will be rescued... Long Hair will be socially condemned by his beloved sister and imprisoned. Asuka will lose everything too—but when that happens, you’ll be the only one she can rely on.
Asmodeus: AND THEN, SHE’LL BE COMPLETELY YOURS TOO.
MC: THERE ARE THINGS YOU CAN DO AND THINGS YOU CAN’T!!
Asmodeus: Haah. Aren’t you misunderstanding something?
Asmodeus: DID YOU FORGET YOU MADE A DEAL WITH A DEMON?
MC stares at Asmodeus in shock.
Asmodeus: This Friday... Long Hair called Azusa-chan. Asuka-chan is planning to break in and call the police.
Asmodeus: What to do after knowing that? You decide. I’M LOOKING FORWARD TO SEEING IT.
The chapter ends with Asuka standing in the street at night, in front of the MC’s house, murmuring, '...Souichi-kun.'
Insight: Welp, that explains why the MC seemed so oblivious about Azusa. He’s really just a pawn in Asmodeus’s game.
The chapter begins with Hina and Sekido questioning Miku in a bathroom at school.
Hina: Miku… What are you planning?
Miku: AH… THAT’S NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS!
Sekido: It is important!!
Hina: The reason Asuka-chan asked me for your number… Sakuraba (MC) asked me to find it out—from you.
Sekido: DON’T GET THE WRONG IDEA. IF SAKURABA-KUN’S OKAY WITH IT, I CAN PAY YOU BACK FOR THE EARRINGS FROM THAT TIME. DO YOU WANT ME TO DO IT RIGHT HERE, RIGHT NOW?
Miku: Haah. Fine.
Sekido: Seriously… You should’ve just been honest and told us everything from the start. You’re wasting our time.
Miku smiles devilishly as she's about to tell them.
At the apartment, Hina and Sekido tell the MC what Miku told them.
MC: So... Asmodeus is using Takeuchi-san (Miku) to push Asuka-chan into doing something?
Hina: Yeah... Apparently, she already knows. They told Asuka-chan about Mitsuru raping Miku and Hayami-san (Azusa). They told her that if she doesn’t want Sakuraba to hate her, she has to do something about her brother—...
Hina stops talking when she sees the scary look on the MC’s face.
Hina and Sekido: ¿!HII!?
MC: ...I'm leaving.
Sekido: AH... Sakuraba-kun.
MC activates his teleport marker to head home.
Hina and Sekido: Haah.
Sekido: Sakuraba-kun... He was really angry.
Hina: Yeah. I’m going home too. What about you...?
Sekido: I’ll stay... Sakuraba-kun might come back.
At home, MC finds Asmodeus in his room.
Asmodeus: Oh... Welcome back. Why the scary face?
MC: What are you trying to do?
Asmodeus: What do you mean...? Ah! This is about Asuka-chan, right?
MC: I’VE ALREADY SEDUCED ASUKA! I TOOK HER FROM TAKESHIGE (Mitsuru)!
Asmodeus: Yeah... And so?
MC: NOW ALL THAT'S LEFT IS TO SHOW TAKESHIGE...
Asmodeus: Letting Long Hair get a little depressed won’t change anything, you know? Although, Azusa-chan will probably suffer even more than she already is...
MC: Azusa? Even though she’s locked up now, when I’m done with this, Azusa will be able to—...
Asmodeus thinks, “Ah… that’s right. I blocked his thoughts so he couldn’t think past that.” Then, she snaps her fingers, lifting the spell she had placed on MC.
Asmodeus: Long Hair keeps calling Azusa-chan out so he can keep raping her. What are you saying, darling?
MC thinks, “Huh...? But Azusa’s locked up.”
MC then grabs his head in pain. “UUGH.”
MC thinks: “That was a possibility. If it’s Takeshige (Mitsuru), who could no longer touch Takeuchi-san (Miku)... Then of course he’d threaten and go after another girl. So then… why!? Why did it never even cross my mind!? Why!?”
Asmodeus watches with an awkward smile as MC clutches his head.
Asmodeus: I told Asuka-chan... “Your brother is raping your boyfriend’s childhood friend... It’s really brave of you to be willing to condemn your own brother just so your boyfriend doesn’t hate you.”
Asmodeus: Azusa-chan will be rescued... Long Hair will be socially condemned by his beloved sister and imprisoned. Asuka will lose everything too—but when that happens, you’ll be the only one she can rely on.
Asmodeus: AND THEN, SHE’LL BE COMPLETELY YOURS TOO.
MC: THERE ARE THINGS YOU CAN DO AND THINGS YOU CAN’T!!
Asmodeus: Haah. Aren’t you misunderstanding something?
Asmodeus: DID YOU FORGET YOU MADE A DEAL WITH A DEMON?
MC stares at Asmodeus in shock.
Asmodeus: This Friday... Long Hair called Azusa-chan. Asuka-chan is planning to break in and call the police.
Asmodeus: What to do after knowing that? You decide. I’M LOOKING FORWARD TO SEEING IT.
The chapter ends with Asuka standing in the street at night, in front of the MC’s house, murmuring, '...Souichi-kun.'
Insight: Welp, that explains why the MC seemed so oblivious about Azusa. He’s really just a pawn in Asmodeus’s game.
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Death Note ending please!!
Well, from the beginning it had already been shown that he was just her battery and had no way of going against her plans, it was an interesting plot and quite bad to know that she had manipulated his mind so that he wouldn't think about Azusa, and now we just have to wait to see if Sakuraba will do something or just follow Asmodeus' plan and also what will be the fate of Azusa and Asuka and if Sakuraba will ever have any dialogue with Azusa.
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Thanks for the quick TL. Finally the MC discovers the truth! And there's actually a proper justification for him ghosting his CHF.
I pray that he actually does something and saves her before she gets raped, now he knows. But sadly knowing this author, I suspect he wants to draw more of Azusa. And Asmodeus' whole plotting here doesn't make sense if it all ends with her deciding to tell MC randomly and him stopping long hair. Only thing I can think of that involves Azusa being saved unharmed is Asuka being used as a sacrificial lamb.
Huh
Don't entirely know how I feel about the brainwashing reveal, would feel more "intentional" if there were inconsistencies noticed by MC. I was Sakuraba's biggest hater , but the retroactive absolution ironically makes him worst as a character for me. Now it's not a willful decent into debauchery in the guise of saving Azusa, he's just a mark. You might as well have the story from Asmodeus' point of view, would work better.
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Yeah this TWEEEST kinda nullifies a lot of the feelings I have about this story. On one hand, yeah it explains things. But it also makes it so that we can't trust anything that's happening.
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WTF. That is even worse then MC being a straight up retard ignoring the CF. Now entire thing is meaningless. Because once you introduce brainwashing as a power, you practicely fuck up the entire plotline from the begining. There is no salvaging this. Where is the fun watching a literal omnipotent demon with OP powers fucking with bunch of kids? Where is the catharsis? Now we can't root for the demon for fucking over the ignorant MC because she is brainwashing everyone. What is the point of the story now?
Feet first one minute per foot into a wood chipper would be better. With tourniquets, of course. Perhaps also with adrenaline or some other stimulant to keep him from passing out (if that would work) or smelling salts to wake him. Or maybe death by sawing would be better.
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