Chapter 17 was so bad it couldn't be uploaded; after reading it on a malware-infested mirror site, I can see why it isn't here.
While this MTL is still rough, it's not terrible; after reading the minimal-effort dogshit that somebody did for Ch17, this one was a breath of fresh air!
You really need to get an "English-as-a-first-language" proofreader, and with MTL being such a rough tool, well... you may need to give the PR a little compensation (€3/$5/¥500/£3); not much, but a lil' sump'in to say thanks can go a LONG WAY.
It's not a terrible thing, and it can really do wonders... but it's (obviously!) just a suggestion.