“Okaeri, Papa” - Ch. 18 - Rift

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Great concept, poor execution. Like many manga with attempted smart protags and attempted plots, it fails to have anyone else other than the person making the plot even vaguely intelligent or rational.
Write something much better than this then, o expert writer.
 
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So i assume his sister is pregnant with another mans child? And they going to use that against her. First they severe the bro/sis strong family relationship and next then going to destroy the brothers own family. And the brother wont even feel bad about it afterward.
 
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So i assume his sister is pregnant with another mans child? And they going to use that against her. First they severe the bro/sis strong family relationship and next then going to destroy the brothers own family. And the brother wont even feel bad about it afterward.
There's literally nothing suggesting that. Why do these chapters invite these insane asspull theories?
 
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"Bro, that surgery was awful! Both legs lost?!"
"Why don't you try doing a heart transplant, then, bud?"
Alright, if it turns out that they can't drink alcohol because they will melt if they do, because they are aliens who want to create some kind of splice baby with this guy, then ok -- the writing isn't up to par.
 
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She was already suspicious of them before this chapter, especially when the daughter asked MC whether he wants a baby. Sis felt like they are weird and maybe potentially dangerous to her brother, some kind of scammer I would think. So when sis found that one of whom she considers dangerous has her baby, she went in hard panic mode. Mom & daughter were somewhat weird around MC and his family but they have done nothing wrong per se, but sis judged them in her mind as unsafe and behave with this in mind.

Basically sis is trusting her guts, and we readers know that gut feeling has merit.
Doesn't help she wasn't actually in a right state of mind since it was timed just after a call that left her emotionally unstable. The outburst was likely pent-up stress from the call and her own issues, her beloved onii-chan not siding with her, and her mistrust on the new family members as potentially shady. It even made sense where she finally got her mind cleared and wanted to retract her outburst, but was too late and saw it was kinda part of the Oyakodon's plan.
 
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Oh we're judging people based on how they looks like now? Would you do that to black people or asian?

Like I get it since we're the reader and we know the truth but she doesn't. She has no reason to be this angry
Yes, everyone does all the time. And they are literally asian, what are you even on about?
 
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Well the races is just an example. But judging someone based on how you think they look is still stupid
No. It's the definition of smart. It's the thing that's been so fiendishly effective that everyone that hasn't done it for the last hundred thousand years is dead.
Bro thought instinct justify slapping someone for doing nothing wrong💀
'Cept kidnapping a child.
 
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Well the races is just an example. But judging someone based on how you think they look is still stupid
yeah, because you would totally treat a filthy dude with torn clothing with brown stains on his pants around his ass the same way you would treat a clean, well groomed man who is neatly dressed. You might be able to lie to yourself, but you aren't fooling anyone else. 😂😂
 
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yeah, because you would totally treat a filthy dude with torn clothing with brown stains on his pants around his ass the same way you would treat a clean, well groomed man who is neatly dressed. You might be able to lie to yourself, but you aren't fooling anyone else. 😂😂
Treating someone and judging them are different things you moron. Omfg the mismatch between your confidence and your point is so funny 🤣. Bro thought he had a good point 💀
 
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No. It's the definition of smart. It's the thing that's been so fiendishly effective that everyone that hasn't done it for the last hundred thousand years is dead.

'Cept kidnapping a child.
1) lmfao no 😂. You're making shit up kid

2) good thing there's no child being kidnapped. Why do you like making things up kid? Didn't your parents teach you to not lie?
 

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