Onna Chara de Isekai Teni shite Cheatppoi kedo Zako Chara na no de Medatazu Heiwa na Shomin wo Mezashimasu! - Ch. 5.1 - School and friends

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Mia and Beatrice are so cute! :hearts:

@Flaemes Thanks for bringing us this buddy~
On page 12 I believe it was suppsed to be "A talented beautiful girl appeared" Or a "A beautiful girl with strong arms appeared" (Which would also explain the scene of her in the background.)
strong arms would make a lot more sense, as it is now the line does not match the rest of the text nor match the images at all.
 
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Im going to be real anytime they have ages like that I call bullshit and say they can't count or the years are longer because there ain't no way 13 year olds look or act that way
 
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What the fuck does this has to do with being a hero with otherworldly power?
What a dumbass bait...If you want to write yuri, just write yuri.
(I've nothing against that genre, but this just seems utterly disingenuous)
 

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