Art is amazing. The girls are really cute. Underwear is 11/10 amazing. Actual content is terrible. I absolutely despise stupid misunderstandings where vague terminology is used for the sake of events happening. This is shitty writing 101. What I mean by that is that the events that happened (misunderstanding, unable to speak with clear words, everything is vague as fuck) is a case of "Why the hell did it escalate to this?" followed by the answer, "Because the script said so." I was originally rather interested in this, but the pushy nature of the girl and neither of them saying what the fuck they need to say clearly is a big fat NOPE from me here because all this is going to turn into is a melodrama, a badly written one at that. The author trying to throw in emotional scenes falls completely flat on its face because things are moving as such fucking breakneck speeds in the later half of the first chapter that the reader can't invest themselves into the work.
Truly a damn shame, because the art is actually Q U A L I T Y.
