Ore Igai Dare mo Saishu Dekinai Sozai na no ni "Sozai Saishuritsu ga Hikui" to Pawahara suru Osananajimi Renkinjutsushi to Zetsuen shita Senzoku Mado…

[jujariharo]

this is a monthly ain't it

 

[terza2006]

I only read WN about the girl part, and I assure you, it's extremely terrible.

Spoiler

After the MC had left her, everything went downhill. she went mad for a stupid reason that doesn't make any sense, and her life is completely ruined.

The author really knows how to create a shit story.

 

[0Zion]

I like the characters already. More! The art is good and the faces are funny and conveys emotion. More!

 

[vedrit]

I'm sorry for every mistakes i made in this chapter. Hopefully everything is fixed now. Hope you guys enjoy reading it.

I don't need your apologies, I need more chapters!

 

[Kingdo]

I only read WN about the girl part, and I assure you, it's extremely terrible.

Spoiler

After the MC had left her, everything went downhill. she went mad for a stupid reason that doesn't make any sense, and her life is completely ruined.

The author really knows how to create a shit story.

I don't really agree, she doesn't go mad for stupid reasons that don't make sense. That make sense if you understand her personality.

Spoiler: Ruby's problems

She fell hard because of multiples reasons :

• She doesn't know shit about collecting materials, doesn't respect the job and expect perfection from them.
  • The next material collector told her that she has unreasonable expectation.
  • The adventurers refuse to take her quests because of the danger.
  • No collectors are willing to work for her as soon as they saw the ingredients she asks.
• She refuse to admit that Loyd was strong or competent.
  • The next material collector praise Loyd for completing her demands.
  • Nobody does the job or even try, Loyd was the only one who did it.
• She wants to be seen as perfect, she is too prideful to admit she needs help.
  • She refuses all call from the queen
  • Break her own house to hide her problem (having a reasonable excuse to not have done the work “sorry my house has exploded I can't work teehee”)
  • Escape from the knight to hide more (she believes that once she gets Loyd, she could work again and want to gain some time to not have to explain herself about her current situation).
• She is unprofessional and refused to admit her flaws
  • She waits for Loyd to return and takes jobs that she can't do until she is threatened to lose her rank as alchemist.
  • She argues and look down on everyone, including people she needs for her work.
  • She flees and hide because she refuses to take responsibility for her mistakes. (not completing her jobs)
  • When she compares her recipe with her junior, she feels superior to see that her recipe has better result. The junior notice her ingredients are all almost impossible to get. She dismisses it since she has better result.
  • In the trial, she completely loses it since she couldn't explain herself and nobody believes her BS.

To put it simply, she is a selfish-spoiled brat.

 

[xylerepiques]

The first volume of manga are not only made to hook people, they are here to put the basis of the world building. You cant form an objective opinion by only reading a single chapter that barely contain anything.
Seriously if people stop at the first chapter then most masterpiece of literature would be considered to be bad. For exemple the Lord of the ring has an entire arc that explain how Hobbit live. Just for the world building.

Except that Tolkien wrote beautifully and with such depth in his worldbuilding that authors would get wet dreams about reaching half his potential. Tolkien was able to catch the attention of people with just the worldbuilding and this manga doesn't, so you essentially proved the point that this manga's first volume sucks and shows how one-dimensional and generic the plot, characters and setting are.

 

[terza2006]

I don't really agree, she doesn't go mad for stupid reasons that don't make sense. That make sense if you understand her personality.

Spoiler: Ruby's problems

She fell hard because of multiples reasons :

• She doesn't know shit about collecting materials, doesn't respect the job and expect perfection from them.
  • The next material collector told her that she has unreasonable expectation.
  • The adventurers refuse to take her quests because of the danger.
  • No collectors are willing to work for her as soon as they saw the ingredients she asks.
• She refuse to admit that Loyd was strong or competent.
  • The next material collector praise Loyd for completing her demands.
  • Nobody does the job or even try, Loyd was the only one who did it.
• She wants to be seen as perfect, she is too prideful to admit she needs help.
  • She refuses all call from the queen
  • Break her own house to hide her problem (having a reasonable excuse to not have done the work “sorry my house has exploded I can't work teehee”)
  • Escape from the knight to hide more (she believes that once she gets Loyd, she could work again and want to gain some time to not have to explain herself about her current situation).
• She is unprofessional and refused to admit her flaws
  • She waits for Loyd to return and takes jobs that she can't do until she is threatened to lose her rank as alchemist.
  • She argues and look down on everyone, including people she needs for her work.
  • She flees and hide because she refuses to take responsibility for her mistakes. (not completing her jobs)
  • When she compares her recipe with her junior, she feels superior to see that her recipe has better result. The junior notice her ingredients are all almost impossible to get. She dismisses it since she has better result.
  • In the trial, she completely loses it since she couldn't explain herself and nobody believes her BS.

To put it simply, she is a selfish-spoiled brat.

In the past, she was a sweet and hardworking girl with common knowledge and, of course, common sense. Over time, she may have become arrogant, but the sheer stupidity that followed didn't make any sense, and the consequences of it were truly horrible, especially considering the fact that she didn't harm anyone directly. The Queen's reasoning in the trial makes sense considering the very stupid actions she took after the MC left, but if that assassin or whatever hadn't saved her from that horrible prison, I wonder what the Queen would have done. She didn't deserve it.

 

[DarkHunter]

Why does he have to have insane magic? Why cant he just be good at getting rare materials only? Would be a lot more interesting than this super generic plot.

I think that's the thing, he can gather high quality materials but they end up in bad condition because of his raw magical energy

 

[Kingdo]

In the past, she was a sweet and hardworking girl with common knowledge and, of course, common sense. Over time, she may have become arrogant, but the sheer stupidity that followed didn't make any sense, and the consequences of it were truly horrible, especially considering the fact that she didn't harm anyone directly. The Queen's reasoning in the trial makes sense considering the very stupid actions she took after the MC left, but if that assassin or whatever hadn't saved her from that horrible prison, I wonder what the Queen would have done. She didn't deserve it.

I think the “sheer stupidity that follow” is a mixes between arrogance, pride, and isolation. After becoming the alchemist number one, she became arrogant and prideful. Because of that, she disconnects from other alchemists because there are below her, making her isolated from her peer in her own field.
I think that because of the part with the junior. It's her junior, they know each others, but he saw immediately the flaw in her recipe while she only looks at the final result. That's mean, even if they studied together, they didn't share any recipes, so she probably hides her recipe, key of her success. Making her isolated since no one notice the materials' problem.

The rest is just her pride that didn't allow her to take responsibility for her mistake or just admit she needs help. She basically behaves like a child who trash the house, then refuse to go home to not be punished. While in reality, it's worse since the parents will call the police for their missing child.

 

[TheManager]

Dang, I want to punch the MC... That's all...

 

[7AlphaOne1]

I think the “sheer stupidity that follow” is a mixes between arrogance, pride, and isolation. After becoming the alchemist number one, she became arrogant and prideful. Because of that, she disconnects from other alchemists because there are below her, making her isolated from her peer in her own field.
I think that because of the part with the junior. It's her junior, they know each others, but he saw immediately the flaw in her recipe while she only looks at the final result. That's mean, even if they studied together, they didn't share any recipes, so she probably hides her recipe, key of her success. Making her isolated since no one notice the materials' problem.

The rest is just her pride that didn't allow her to take responsibility for her mistake or just admit she needs help. She basically behaves like a child who trash the house, then refuse to go home to not be punished. While in reality, it's worse since the parents will call the police for their missing child.

As someone working in a STEM research field, this is why you NEVER dismiss other people's research as irrelevant. Sure, its not specifically useful for you, but sooner or later it all links. And also going to conferences and hanging out by yourself is boring as fuck.


Remember future scientist kiddos, there's no progress without mutual respect.

 

[Outoto-kun]

I read a similar premise to this, but that one is where the childhood friend is a swordswoman, but that one is atleast has the decency to apologize to the MC,
but this one on the otherhand is straight up a prick.

 

[N2O]

I hope we're gonna completely forget about Ruby after this point but I'm getting the feeling that we won't..

 

[Eienge]

why the hell do people transalte series with less than 3 chapters? free blue balls for everyone

 

[Snowave]

Shoo Shoo go away you miss your chance! Go away you abusive little scum!

 

[DeadintheWater]

I'm glad it is acknowledging the flaws in his personality and there is no sudden shift. He is still pretty weak personality wise.

I'm also glad it is more slapstick. This kind of drama can get heavy and his personality is admittedly annoying if you don't play it for comedy.

 

[K422R]

The template (?) it's based on has a shit-ton of potential. I love MCs that shift out of that victim mindset, and start reinventing themselves.

Now, as for this one, I'm skeptical.

• Can a magician only have a single assistant? Is it not possible to get some guy to do this specific thing that MC is struggling with, and put him in some other role? I mean, it's not like they're strapped for cash.
• MCs ex had a shitty, domineering attitude even in their childhood days, unlike what happened in that very similar story with a swordswoman who cracked under increasing stress and responsibility.
• Over the top "everyone knows and openly hates MC" bs. The whole point of beating and demeaning your spouse is to exert control over them. That's the abuser's privilege, and some random nobodies in a society with social classes (nobles, yo) know better than to get all uppity and lose an eye or a few fingers, or worse as retribution.
• That damn inexplicable random magic battle with some spawned-in broad in the middle of a city. It reeks of plot convenience.

 

[Okazerker]

If this goes the generic "oh wow I actually miss this guy so much how could I have not known his potential for the last 10 years" I'm gonna be disappointed, would rather this be just a story about how he starts his new life again

Nah I wanna see this bitch cry

 

[AnotherOrc]

Skimming the link for the WN provided, people are more-or-less on the nose on what kind of series this is going to be even w/o having to look.

Even the TL chapter names pretty much tell you the gist of what's going on, w/o having to read anything in detail, that the story will follow the plot of the MC roaming around from place to place, surprising people and being confused about why everyone is praising them, and sprinkled in some small omakes/side stories about whats going on with Ruby/the Alchemist every now and then after the MC left.

Spoiler(s):

Spoiler: What more-or-less happens to Ruby from skimming

She looks for a replacement for the MC, a mage who is more handsome and more capable, etc. Later-on she seemingly gets handcuffed and kidnapped for some reason or another and starts to regret and realize that all of her success was due to the MC, because the MC was capable of getting dangrous materials from "Area Zero" and she took it for granted.

I see she's supposed to be increasingly unlikeable, or at least that's what it sounds like.

 

[iSiffrin]

The arts really nice I just hope the story won't be that generic.