Osananajimi ga Hisabisa ni Saikai Shitara Otagai Kyonyuu ni Natteta - Ch. 42

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The man's next chance is right there! But I can understand being captivated by the view :glee:
 
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Thanks for another release!

I would suggest not speedrunning chapters, quality > quantity.

In regards to SFX, it's an all-or-nothing type of deal. Otherwise, it looks sloppy and jarring to the reader when SFX is done inconsistently.
 
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I would suggest not speedrunning chapters, quality > quantity.
Not speedrun per se, just cutting two weeks down to one half of that time I’m not doing much anyway:haa:
In regards to SFX, it's an all-or-nothing type of deal. Otherwise, it looks sloppy and jarring to the reader when SFX is done inconsistently.
I don’t plan on touching any SFX really and I don’t think I really touched any in this chapter.

Apologies if it looks jarring, I’ll take your feedback into consideration next chapter, thanks!
 
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him: "ooh, indirect kiss, huh... hmm.. wonder what she'll let me do..."
her: "why hasn't he raped me yet?? am i just ugly?? 😭"
 
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"Brought to you by:
- A lonely Valentine's day
-Cap'N Crunch's OOPS! All Berries"
(Page 8)
I wonder which I feel more sad about, the Valentine's day or that you ate Cap'N Crunch's.
 

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