Osananajimi Kanojo no Morahara ga Hidoin de Zetsuen Sengen shite Yatta - Vol. 1 Ch. 4

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Honestly the premise of the MC breaking away from the control freak ex was great, but him suddenly being perfect in every single way is a little grating. I'm almost wondering if this story would work better as a 4koma or something.
Yeah that kinda is my problem with this manga tbh. Still a nice read, and the premise is nice as you said. But we're at chapter 4, and he already is a giga chad known by all his classmates, have completely cut ties with the ex, is already making a new girl fall, etc.

At this rate I'm wondering how the story is going to progress in the future chapters if everything is already resolved in the very first chapters. I'd have preferred to see the MC struggle a little bit to cut ties with the ex, struggle a little to become popular etc. That'd have made for a more engaging story (as well as a more realistic and relatable one). Getting out of an abusive/toxic relationship is not as easy as that.

Finally, I really really fear that the author will give us a bullshit "i was an insecure tsundere teehee" later on. I've seen it happen in so many mangas where the girl act like a total scumbag but is later entirely forgiven because "i have trouble communicating and I'm cute teehee so everything must be forgiven".

So far it hasn't been that way with this manga, and I really hope the author won't go that way.
 
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Yeah that kinda is my problem with this manga tbh. Still a nice read, and the premise is nice as you said. But we're at chapter 4, and he already is a giga chad known by all his classmates, have completely cut ties with the ex, is already making a new girl fall, etc.
I think it's supposed to be a short story (single volume LN worth of content), so all the rushing could deserve more tolerance with that in mind. Although I also hope it doesn't get sequel since those attempts usually don't turn out well.

The being overboard with how everyone suddenly likes him and how he is so out of league from everyone else is too much though.
 
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I think it's supposed to be a short story (single volume LN worth of content), so all the rushing could deserve more tolerance with that in mind. Although I also hope it doesn't get sequel since those attempts usually don't turn out well.

The being overboard with how everyone suddenly likes him and how he is so out of league from everyone else is too much though.
Yeah with teh short length of the LN I can't see this going past 30 chapters. Also yeah even in the LN it was a point of complaint how he suddenly became a 11/10 gigachad overnight.
 
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The story would still roll without him being OP. The only close friends that actually matter in the story are Fumi and Chiaki. From the antagonist, Hanabi and Kirigaya. The rest are pretty much faceless characters, so it doesn't matter if they worship him or just being normal friendly classmates, it wouldn't affect the plot.

One thing I still can't get over from the manga adaptation. Chiaki is ikemen in the LN version, not this kind of guy. (although the manga version is probably more accurate as the narration said he got scary face).
 
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Man the ex still continues to act like she does even though she wants him back, like surely you'd think she'd realise thats why he left?

This felt a little wheel spinny this chapter though not much was really acomplished.

I basically know how this series goes so I'll not spoil but you'll still see me comment as the manga continues (Specially as it might not follow the LN)
It takes time for some ppl to realize where they went wrong.
On my case, I moved on to another girl before finally my ex asked me to go back to be with her again. I wouldn't because my current girl is de best.
Sry dor the serious comment, but well that glasses girl is cute
 
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It takes time for some ppl to realize where they went wrong.
On my case, I moved on to another girl before finally my ex asked me to go back to be with her again. I wouldn't because my current girl is de best.
Sry dor the serious comment, but well that glasses girl is cute
Nah is all good wether serious or joke all comments shouldn't require an apology :p My comment though will prolly make more sense later though assuming it follows the LN.
 
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To be honest, forgetting all the "breaking up and turning out to be a perfect guy", I have to say honestly, the ex girlfriend, the manga is making she looks like she is just "someone who get lost in their character". But, in LN, that I've read a bit, she is much worse, in LN she is sociopath.

I'm getting to like the manga, but they are making her image too much light.
 
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To be honest, forgetting all the "breaking up and turning out to be a perfect guy", I have to say honestly, the ex girlfriend, the manga is making she looks like she is just "someone who get lost in their character". But, in LN, that I've read a bit, she is much worse, in LN she is sociopath.

I'm getting to like the manga, but they are making her image too much light.
Yeah it's why I fear they may change it to make her more sympathic to maybe get simp fans for her or something? I hope they don't change the plot though as that'd be insane.
 
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Yeah it's why I fear they may change it to make her more sympathic to maybe get simp fans for her or something? I hope they don't change the plot though as that'd be insane.
I still need to see the outcome of everything, but where I stoped I can have the ideia for where everything is going.

But I need they to keep the original story. I've had enough of that kind of romcom that change for catch the eye of people.
 

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