Otome Game no Heroine de Saikyou Survival - Ch. 36

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I'm happy enough with this TL. This was a pretty action heavy chapter and I didn't find anything that got in the way of my enjoyment. Could use some work on cleaning/RD so there's fewer, er, shadows from the original :haa:

But yeah, this is fine :salute:
 
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@Justking14 Translation is solid; easy to read, good font and typeset, makes sense word for word and in whole sentences. Good job. About the only thing I'd critique is the use of "Wha?!" for the orcs, but that'd be under an assumption that's not literally what they use in JP.
 
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"let down my guard down" was the only typo I caught, but usually I just read right pass em anyway.

Thanks for the work.
 
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There's no way an anime adaptation is going to handle this fight choreography properly, but it would be rad if it did
Greatly depends on this choreography coming straight up from the LN and not being like Katanaika Ossan where the manga was doing extra work making the fights interesting and then the lame LN fights got adapted instead.
 

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