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@Redsaint I mean, I guess? I kinda feel like this story is well-written enough to forgive it though. The tree powers have never been used to hurt people bamboo-torture style - they grow around rather than through people. Plus there's the whole narrative wrapped up in using the powers from Myr - that growing these trees everywhere is good to bring fantasia back in the world. Plus the philosophy that he adopted from Myr and Grimm's recommendations on fighting. I'd say the one nitpick is buried under a lot of well-crafted character development