Rakujitsu no Pathos - Vol. 5 Ch. 32 - Am I Turning Into a Grandpa?
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what a dissapointment
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@Iramis
Unnecessary? You're clearly missing the point, this part is made to build tension on the characters, everyone is blocked in some way:
Yuuki with an older husband that can't handle her
Aki is too busy to meet Yuuki and has no private time whatsoever
Kouhai-chan is now blocked by the creepy assistant
Things can only explode now...
Unnecessary? You're clearly missing the point, this part is made to build tension on the characters, everyone is blocked in some way:
Yuuki with an older husband that can't handle her
Aki is too busy to meet Yuuki and has no private time whatsoever
Kouhai-chan is now blocked by the creepy assistant
Things can only explode now...
@Antairan
I like the slow progress between the MC and the Sensei, as long as the focus remains on them it's fine but with the addition of new characters I just think it might shift the focus away from the. But then again I could be wrong, as initially I didn't like where the author was going with the kouhai character but then he used that as a springboard for more progress between MC and Sensei which was great. Anyways I understand the reason why the author did it (as you mentioned), but the reason I called it unnecessary is because I liked the way things were going and I've seen many manga which start out great but then they start getting more and more convoluted and get away from what made them great initially so my faith is stretched thin. But I guess it's unfair to judge this author based on other people's work so i'll just hope for the best.
I like the slow progress between the MC and the Sensei, as long as the focus remains on them it's fine but with the addition of new characters I just think it might shift the focus away from the. But then again I could be wrong, as initially I didn't like where the author was going with the kouhai character but then he used that as a springboard for more progress between MC and Sensei which was great. Anyways I understand the reason why the author did it (as you mentioned), but the reason I called it unnecessary is because I liked the way things were going and I've seen many manga which start out great but then they start getting more and more convoluted and get away from what made them great initially so my faith is stretched thin. But I guess it's unfair to judge this author based on other people's work so i'll just hope for the best.
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Congratulations, you played yourself, kouhai
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"i don't think that sort of thing will be happening anymore..." oh i can only hope that's true(most likely won't be though...) i just LOVE the second worker introduced haha, he's(so far)doing a great job, coming in between them, keep it up. didn't come here for love rival stuff, came for the former student and mature teacher relationship. why do these series creators always have to add love rivals or more then one love interest...
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MC is slowly reaching transcendence through compulsory abstinence. /s
That being said I never liked characters like new assistant over here. I don’t want him to fall into the category of supporting character who happens to get together with a supporting character who’s actually good. A good example would be that photographer dude in DomeKano. The way he was introduced was just trashy. He was outfitted to be some sort creepy stalker but in reality he’s a nice guy.
When you want to write a supporting character who’s gonna get together with someone who was pursuing the MC, make sure they don’t have a really bad first impression and pull a “they’re actually really good once the story progresses” because once they enter halfway through the story and have a bad first impression, they’ll forever leave a sour taste in people’s mouths.
That being said I never liked characters like new assistant over here. I don’t want him to fall into the category of supporting character who happens to get together with a supporting character who’s actually good. A good example would be that photographer dude in DomeKano. The way he was introduced was just trashy. He was outfitted to be some sort creepy stalker but in reality he’s a nice guy.
When you want to write a supporting character who’s gonna get together with someone who was pursuing the MC, make sure they don’t have a really bad first impression and pull a “they’re actually really good once the story progresses” because once they enter halfway through the story and have a bad first impression, they’ll forever leave a sour taste in people’s mouths.
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