First of all i apologize if my english is broken, but i've got something to nitpick about the TL
Heavenly HORSE Sect?!?! What the fuck? Seriously, even if you are a newbie to Korean's version of Wuxia, have some small knowledge won't hurt you. In the Korean's Wuxia there are three popular sect. First and foremost the common enemy of Murim, the Heavenly Demon Sect. Yes, the the one that got mistranslated as the Heavenly HORSE Sect in the first chapter. The second is Mount Hua Sect. The third is Heavenly Gate Sect or more commonly Tl'ed as Heaven's Way Sect.
The second thing i need to nitpick is the INTANGIBLE Sword in the chapter 14. Again, really? There offical term for them. Mostly know as Formlessness or in this case the correct term would be Formless Sword, not INTANGIBLE Sword.
That's all i need to nitpick. You fix it or not, your choice.