S-Rank Party Kara Kaikosareta [Jugushi] ~"Noroi no Item" Shika Tsukuremasen ga, Sono Seinou wa Artifact-kyuu nari......!~ - Vol. 2 Ch. 8.1

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wait, I was just rereading when suddenly I came upon a chapter I could not remember.. SOMEONE PICKED IT UP? HECK YEAH
 
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WOOOOOOOOOOOO, WOOOOOOOOOOOO
DAVE IS THANKS YOU, DAVE MANGA FAVOURITE IS REVIVED!
 
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Hi, since you asked for comments... so far the only issue is that the english is very unnatural and hard to read; it's like you picked up the very first result the dictionary gave you when checking the meaning of a certain word without seeing if there was another one that would fit better in the specific context.
Similarly, there are a few grammatical errors here and there, like missing "the" or the like or using the incorrect conjugation.

Some examples to make it practical:
page 2, "Agriculture city, Farm Edge!" -> "the agriculture city, Farm Edge!"
page 3, "approximately one hour from the border" -> "a hour of walk away from the city"
page 3, "there pastures for grazing" -> "there are pastures for grazing"

and so on.
 
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Hi, since you asked for comments... so far the only issue is that the english is very unnatural and hard to read; it's like you picked up the very first result the dictionary gave you when checking the meaning of a certain word without seeing if there was another one that would fit better in the specific context.
Similarly, there are a few grammatical errors here and there, like missing "the" or the like or using the incorrect conjugation.

Some examples to make it practical:
page 2, "Agriculture city, Farm Edge!" -> "the agriculture city, Farm Edge!"
page 3, "approximately one hour from the border" -> "a hour of walk away from the city"
page 3, "there pastures for grazing" -> "there are pastures for grazing"

and so on.
This. Thank you for pointing my wrong! I'll be edit it and repost if possible. Thanks!
 
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The reaction followed from there....when he said "it's farming time" and farmed all over.......alone.
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Gimli is a boy right?
 
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This. Thank you for pointing my wrong! I'll be edit it and repost if possible. Thanks!
Remember that I just posted some examples, please make sure to re-read the whole chapter. :salute:
Also you can edit an already uploaded chapter; I'm saying this because if you delete and re-post the reading marker and the comments go away and it kind of sucks as a reader.
 
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I was scrolling through my followed manga and since I reread it like a week ago I forgot that it hasn’t been updated in five months and it took till the fifth page to remember. Anyways, thanks for the translation!
 
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I dont really have any problems with the translation. Its not like some webnovel translators where its not even readable.

Thank you for picking this up
 

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