Sekai wo Sukuu Tame ni Watashi to Asa Chun Dekimasu ka? - Vol. 2 Ch. 7

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These translations need a lot of work. Even when the meaning is mostly conveyed, the poor spelling, grammar, punctuation, and syntax make for a difficult read.
 
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I don't understand how he wouldn't awake at any point. I do hope he slowly gets over his problem or I can't see this lasting long. Even if it was him slowly getting used to each girl like getting used to the loli cause he can't even fuck her with Fujimoto being the hardest to get used too
 
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I will reluctantly admit that I wholly, unabashedly love this series and wish for it to last 100+ chapters.
 

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raws for vols 1-3

https://gofile.io/d/58zMzD
 
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This manga is simultaneously better, and yet way worse, than it has any right to be. Weird.
 
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I think the translation accuracy was okay except for some minor errors, but the most glaring one was on page 19 where it said あたった (atatta) which should be "it's touching" or "it touched" but was translated as "I'm I-." On a positive note, I was pleasantly surprised that you knew the "G" in "Gのようで" (pg 11) was short for gokiburi. A lot of first time TLers might not have realized the meaning. But you messed up the speech bubble just before that part when you wrote "if you one" when it should have been, "if you see one."

The most problematic issue is the format. Capitalizing the first letter of nearly every word is not a correct way to write English. Either do all caps with Wild Words (the typical way) or only capitalize the words which ought to be capitalized (e.g. first word of a sentence, proper nouns, etc).

Also, the last panel used the wrong "your." It should have been, "Since you're her classmate, give her my best regards." And a mistake right after that is the missing apostrophe in "we're classmates."

There were similar grammatical issues throughout the chapter, but I won't list them all here.

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https:// piccoma.com/web/product/13892/ episodes?etype=E chap 19-21 out to read or other sources if you can find
 
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HOLY FUCK I HATE CENSORS, ESPECIALLY WORDS.

on other sites, chapter 8 has fucking egregious speech censor, words like fuck, sex, etc. are completely whited out (even though this is already borderline porn)
 
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This shit is so ass.
This whole thing is epitome of "daydream in 7th grade "

This Mangaca had really, REALLY good character designs and somewhat good world building and this would be really good piece of fiction, if he or she didn't get that weird fetish version of teasing where "You need to imagine what happened there :3"

Honestly, with how i despise braindead harems, THIS could be really mediocre but still somewhere or step below "dayly life with monster girls"

Or really good hentai to read, probably with questionable scenes and it probably would be a pure fap material rather then something with story.

Buuut we have a representation of sexual thought of a middle schooler who doesn't know what and how sex is but reallyreallyREALLY wants it so he imagines how hot situation is but can't comprehend how did is done.

I can't believe i got bluebolled by this, it's actually pathetic omg

Funny thing is, this comm probably won't be seen by anyone but mods lul
 

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