There’s something I found very off putting about that saintess
I really can’t pin down this girls mental state
That's one reason I don't like this series, it doesn't ever consider how someone got where they are.
Context:
I'm willing to gloss over shallow characters as long as it's entertaining.
But I despise works that have characters who [spontaneously kill people], then suddenly cast them [as president] to drive plot.
How did it happen? How is it even possible? You can't "magic away" pre-story and post-story to justify a plot event setup.
Assumption:
"Saintess" is a clinical sociopath (i.e. extreme bouts of emotion), as opposed to psychopath (i.e. disassociative).
Author is trying to paint a bout of her 'evil rampage' -- where she's happy for her minion -- as humanizing her.
Trying to illustrate that "she's a normal person deep inside, and you should
sympathize".
But that's not how it works.
- Her thought process is fundamentally broken. And no empathy (matched feeling) by the reader is even possible.
It's like trying to compare "normal" (base 10) addition to "hex-ed" (base 16, pun on cursed) addition. She's a monster.
Author has already shown her math "doesn't line up" with normal people. Explicitly gave backstory how it's not "normal".
- Her past actions are heinously criminal, within framework of that world's (and our world)'s laws.
She already sent someone she blackmailed to be ____'ed already. And if MC hadn't saved the victim -- would have.
(And that's only what we've seen, on-screen. Not any of off-screen. Like murder of entire families. And slavery of MC.)
Author
really needs to pick his battles on this one.
It's possible to
sympathize with good villains (
e.g. original 4,5,6-only Darth Vader) because they are fundamentally normal.
They share the same thought processes as audience does.
And became what they are because of "dramatic development" (in Greek drama sense).
However these completely warped monsters are impossible to sympathize, forgive, or even associate with.
Only in rare instances in voluminmous works (and over
multiple narratives) can you even begin to unravel a monster.
And very, very few authors can manage to pull off that sort of character depth. (
i.e. Hannibal Lecter/Silence of the Lambs)
...and I'm
pretty sure Author-kun here didn't spend months
interviewing FBI criminal psychologists prior to writing the Saintess.