Senyuu. - Vol. 5 Ch. 67 - His Story #3: The Reason for His Resolve

[MangaDex]

 

[Ceiye]

Oh boy, I think I know where this is going. Eruba pls don't be like that, it'll only make what's going to happen even worse

 

[egaeat]

Thank you so much for picking up the main story!!
Also a little bit of feedback but perhaps the last line of boss!alba could be simplified to just "You dont mind if i use this power to end unhappiness, right?"
But that's just my two cents!

 

[viridiansky]

@egaeat hey, thank you for the feedback! 👀 I always appreciate it.
I'm not sure which line you're talking about exactly though- could you tell me the page number and panel?

 

[egaeat]

@viridiansky Im very glad that you dont mind!
Its the second to last page panel number 2: "Are you fine with that use of that power ending on a sad note?"

 

[viridiansky]

@egaeat Ah, I see, thank you! Broadly speaking, the line in the Japanese has Boss asking Rchimedes whether he wants to leave his power to wither away unused after leaving behind a legacy of tragedies, rather than seeing it be used for good again by teaching Alba. I couldn't think of a good way to express it naturally in English >.< Does it come off like Boss wants to end unhappiness? That wasn't the intention ;w;