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Typo on page 1: "...all sorts of creatu
ers go..." >> "...all sorts of creatu
res go..."
Typo on page 3: "Our skirts fli
ped!" >> "Our skirts flip
ped!"
Typo on page 4: "...they get to sch
ol!" >> "...they get to scho
ol!"
Typo on page 5: "...with each o
ter..." >> "...with each o
ther..."
Typo on page 9: "...will feel th
eir is a risk..." >> "...will feel th
ere is a risk..."
Rephrasing on page 11: "and they'll
be attached..." >> "and they'll
get attached..."
Typo on page 13: "I'll show you my te
ritory ,,," >> "I'll show you my ter
ritory ,,,"
Typo on page 14: "Why aren't you co
mming?" >> "Why aren't you co
ming?"
Typo on page 20: "I was really ha
py." >> "I was really hap
py."
Typo on page 29: "We washed our
slves off..." >> "We washed ours
elves off..."
Typos on page 30:
"...and po
sessing the..." >> "...and pos
sessing the..."
"...t
hough enough to..." >> "...
tough enough to..."
Typo on page 32: "The wolf is completel
s unafraid..." >> "The wolf is completel
y unafraid..."
Typo on page 34: "So you rea
ly are..." >> "So you real
ly are..."
Also RIP rapeman, his translations were really great and all went in smokes because some people got "offended"....