There are some translation issues with Chapter 11.
Page 5, Koma 4 - Red: If anyone wants to die, feel free and come talk to her.
Corrected - Red: It would be different if you needed to talk to her or people's lives would be in danger.
Page 6, Koma 1 - Guild Master: You sure are confident Red. I'm surprised you showed your true face.
Corrected - Guild Master: You sure are confident Red. I'm surprised you had this side to you.
Page 6, Koma 2 - Red: So, it appears you know I'm a D-Rank adventurer.
Corrected - Red: I'm surprised you were so familiar with a D-Rank adventurer like me.
Page 7, Koma 1 - There used to be a B-Rank adventurer who was also a guild master.
Corrected - The Guild Master Garatin used to be Zoltan's previous generation's B-Rank adventurer.
Page 7, Koma 1 - He looked exactly like this guy. If he were a mere lookalike, if he were to meet the real one, he would be trembling in his boots by now.
Corrected - A normal adventurer would be shivering in his boots if he were stared down by such a threatening glare.
Page 7, Koma 2 - There was a time that monstrous adventurer destroyed every battlefield he fought on.
Corrected - Compared to Danan, who destroyed every battlefield he fought on.
Page 10, Koma 1 - Thief: I know everything about you D-Rank.
Corrected - Thief: You're pretty knowledgeable for a D-Rank.
Page 11, Koma 1 - Thief: Look
Corrected - Red: That's....
Page 13, Koma 1 - Thief: How does that sound? You'd only pay 50 Periru for a night. It's a 50% discount. Only 50 Periru, I tell ya.
Corrected - Thief: Can you imagine? Women who you'd normally pay 50 Periru for a night with. Not those half coin Quarter Periru, but those fully round whole silver Periru.
Page 13, Koma 4 - Red: Lit's probably worth a thousand of those elven coins.
Corrected - Red: I wouldn't trade Lit for even a thousand of those elven coins.
Page 14, Koma 1 - Thief: Then if I can bring 10 million Periru you'll accept the offer?
Corrected - Thief: You must be quite the guy or just an idiot not to blink over ten thousand Periru.
Page 14, Koma 1 - Red: Do you even realize how much that is? Don't tell me you're going to steal 10 million from the guild and bring it here.
Corrected - Red: The guild is willing to give me ten thousand Periru because they know Lit has a value greater than that, right?
Page 16, Koma 1 - Lit: If Red doesn't like it, the neither do I. I'm gonna stay in this town with Red. There's no way I'm coming with you guys!
Corrected - Lit: if you harass Red over this and drive him out of town, I'm going with him!
Page 21, Koma 1 - Red: Well, fell free to think of it any way you want...and if you want other kinds of jewelry, just tell me.
Corrected - Red: While you're getting the wrong idea... I'd like you to let me know what your favorite gemstone is.
Page 21, Koma 3 - The biggest problem is not having a suitable skill for love.
Corrected - The problem is that your divine protection doesn't increase your skill in romantic relationships.