Try to understand this part: He has the same text twice in 2 different bubbles in his editing, both are worded differently, meaning he had both versions in his script.
The second version is identical to meraki's translation, meaning he had that copied in his script, either he wrote all the script for no reason into his script and accidentally pasted it into the wrong box, OR he was using it as base and just changing it to seem different. Either way, it's not a re-re-tl as you are trying to say
@mage_goo