@schyzd
Thanks for picking this up!
Feedback:
- Redrawing sound effects is a lot of time for marginal gain, I say pass. Leave the small typed out sound effects and such.
- Keep doing the early chapters until you get your style down, then jump to the current chapters. Consistency is important and people are much more forgiving of early chapters being a bit messy. This also allows newbies a good chunk to get a feel for the series.
- Don't try to compete in speed with the bigger groups, they are essentially doing it for profit and will respond with $$ in mind if you overtake them. Plus, not worth the stress. Ideally, release one or two weeks behind them regularly; MD readers won't notice and the groups won't get butthurt.
- Find a proofreader. Your translation is pretty good with the core meaning(the most important part), but the word choice is a bit stilted, so could use a quick pass from a native speaker.
All in all, great job for the first time out! Folks like you doing it for the love of the work and the community is becoming increasingly rare, so thank again!