Sono Akuyaku Kizoku, Mama Heroine ga Suki Sugiru ~Shinshi na Doryoku de Saikyou to Nari Fuguu na Oshi Chara Tasukemakuru~ - Ch. 22.1

[Wind369]

God this manga is such a riot

 

[ssj4maiko]

This translation keeps the suffixes instead of stripping them out, that's a big plus for me already

 

[ENCORAAAAAAAAA]

Thanks for the tl

 

[WolfgangHype]

I always find it interesting trying to figure out what was in the original script after seeing two different takes on translation. Like on page 2 one mentions traps and the other says monsters.

This one does do a better job I think conveying the mom's habit of treating everyone as babies.

 

[Hoezell]

In reverse goo goo babies we trust

 

[yayforpenguin]

Bro was gonna kill the hero if he got any closer

 

[phil777]

It hurts when I see a TL war.

 

[wakanana]

Is the baby transformation metaphorical or not? I was under the impression that the elf had truly turned him into a baby last time.

 

[mayu_hojo]

THE TURNS. TABLED!!

 

[Morose]

usually people wait 3 months before taking over a series, dont they?

That's just a community guideline, not a hardcore rule.
If you believe that the translation quality or accuracy of the current group/person working on it is bad.
Then it's not wrong to take over and work on it, if you can.

 

[sassinos]

Page one makes a whole lot more sense(and is funny) when you know the title of the book she's reading.

 

[ssj4maiko]

Is the baby transformation metaphorical or not? I was under the impression that the elf had truly turned him into a baby last time.

yes, it's all metaphorical.

On the previous time when Demonio went all pampered baby, Sharon who was watching was seeing a full grown man doing all that.
Same here.

 

[booterror]

UNO REVERSO!

MC leaves me speechless once again

 

[Litreara]

I always find it interesting trying to figure out what was in the original script after seeing two different takes on translation. Like on page 2 one mentions traps and the other says monsters.

Your comment got me curious, so I checked the raws. As I suspected, this group is making up lines.

ごめん森の中に罠が多くて

ごめん — “Sorry” (casual apology).

森の中に — “in the forest.”

• 森 (もり) = forest
• の = possessive/connector (“of” or “in”)
• 中 (なか) = inside, within

Together: 森の中 = “inside the forest”

に = location particle meaning “in” or “at.”

罠が多くて — “there are many traps” (with a connective nuance).

• 罠 (わな) = trap
• が = subject marker (“there are…”)
• 多くて = te-form of 多い (おおい), meaning “many” or “a lot.”
• The て (te-form) connects it to another phrase, often implying “and…” or giving a reason.

おっぱい吸いながらねむねむしまちょう~

• おっぱい — breasts / boobs
• 吸いながら — “while sucking” (吸う = to suck + ながら = while doing)
• ねむねむ — baby-talk for “sleepy” (from 眠い)
• しまちょう~ — baby-talk version of しましょう, meaning “let’s do (it).”

In the first image it says “traps” and not “monsters,” and in the second image it says “boobs” and not “mama’s milk.”