Sono Ossan, Isekai de Nishuume Play wo Mankitsuchuu - Vol. 1 Ch. 5

[alidan]

@twinklecake
my best guess here, but if I was adapting a comic from a novel, I would be of two minds
1) the intro chapters are more or less a re tred of neraly everything else, so skim them
2) the intro arc is usually going to be some character building, due to it being a novel, there is more fluf here then would be in a comic for the same feel.
3) I would want to get to the 'good' stuff fast

shield hero as an example, I would want to fast track the "betrayal" as fast as possible because up till then the story is business as usual.
the dragon/spider one (I forget the name) I would fast track to humans with stops at events
im a spider so what, I would fast track much of the encounters outside of big bads or events till they are out

the problem comes from how much do you fast track, and this feels like its missing pages with how much its skipping

If the only purpose for the manga is to advertise the novel, I think i wouldn't care much, so I would watch it with this one, either they are fast tracking due to incompetence or they are fast tracking because this is just a novel ad

 

[introvertchild]

I'm honestly just following this to see how bad it can get. Never disappoints, every chapter is written/drawn worse than the previous one 😂

 

[yarielist]

...
No NTR please ...

 

[daime17]

Sorry to brake the news but they already did it.

 

[crazybars]

Wtf is going on lol.

This manga.

 

[Nakanowatari]

Holy hell man, wtf am I even reading. Did whoever in charge of this manga really read this and give it an OK?

 

[Kightray]

wtf did they do to this chapter, is it me or did they like crammed 3-4 LN chapter into a single bloody manga chapter, it looks much more horrible than arifureta anime

 

[dharman]

killer-ape said, "U Gi Oh"

 

[ak0ztik]

wtf happened in those last pages, time skip?

 

[Robbini]

@ak0ztik

Monkey evolved > AOEd the area > MC Got hurt but killed it > MC was about to faint from blood loss > Leonard (probably the Hero) and Fil captured the guildmaster while he was out

 

[ry3te4]

Little too late bud.

 

[Silwith]

Wow... that didnt make sense at ALL.

I mean, its extra confusing trough the weird pace, but the betrayel doesnt make sense in the first place, thats awful writing xD

 

[Jinyo]

I love how you never see anything happen. They just say they won and have no real story at all.

 

[DexerMang]

Is Tachibana Hakuto a pen name for Kizaru? 😎

 

[Izaya_Onisai]

...This series is soooo disappointing. 😔

Sono Ossan, Iskipkai de Nipskipuume Skiplay wo Manskip

 

[Kazumaik]

God named skills have been so downplayed for people under level 10 being able to use it without pinnacle stats or levels.

 

[blacksaber79]

This whole 1st volume feels incredible rushed. So many things left to the readers imagination.

what happened in the underwater laby?
did yuya get that elf artifact?
what happened with the guild master to make him like this(demonic possession? influenced by nobles? or is he just an ass?) ?
Guess I'll put this on hold when I'm done reading my main manga.

 

[Lohengrin]

wtf was this chapter chaotic dissonance at best. demon sword? leonard? sex pest guild master? Fill has 0 progress beyond one night rodgering.

 

[Roadrunner9000]

Leonard why does he strike me as the root of all evil? could be intuition could be his" i will make her mine no matter what it takes"
and fill maybe a girl but thats no reason to be a wuss infact the bravest person i know is female.

 

[PineyCreek]

Does this manga get better? Or at least a more enjoyable kind of stupid? Because this is a pretty bad chapter by the standards of any genre. How did an editor not say you can't just introduce a villain and reveal his really pathetic motivation, introduce an out of no where sword with some kind of spirit in it, and ramp up your OP character all in a matter of pages.