Suddenly I'm a Noblewoman - Ch. 1 - A Slave and A Concubine Kid

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Could benefit from some grammar edits but seems to be v interesting! Thanks for the translation
 

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Engurish!

Full of grammatical errors everywhere. But the only one I can remember ATM from my phone is 'born a child' give birth to a child.


Also. Those parents are assholes. Their response to suicide threats is basically 'k whatever'

Oh right. Chapter title should be "A slave and a concubine's child".

Assuming the child is the man. Child kind of fits better than kid in this case and the 's is important
 
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ara ara~what i see here... ohoo~a hubby who will pamper his waifu and tsun waifu maybe?lol

interesting
 
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This seems like a really interesting read, but it could definitely use a proofreader.
 
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Its interesting but It needs some proofreading to be done , *Grammarly* app is good for it .
 
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Well, what do you know. Translation was just as bad as expected from that description.
I think it's great that you want to translate and share comics with people who don't speak the original language, but if I'm completely honest, this is not enjoyable to read. The poor grammar is too disruptive. You really should get it proofread.
 

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