this is depressing, majority of reader want to read something sweet with a unique plot but still can be guessed, somehow this story is depressing and can't be guessed what will happen next, even if i try to guess it only depressing thing come to mind, maybe if there will be more development to make it lighter.... what am i talking about....
this story make ME (ok i am talking about me, don't you dare hold this against me as if i am representating every human reader with female gender) a woman feel inferior to a man because the character that everyone love is a man that is the concubine and there is a pitiful woman/the queen, when the MC is only bystander who watch from the side, who is currently can't do anything to change it