Mmmm, look, I like the story, I appreciate that her acting of saving her sister is the act of saving herself and her dreams, wishes, and fantasies, but I also think that she's still super delusional and her brains are no working properly. I really need her to mature and stop judging people in the same way she though when she was a teenager (her sister is plain good, the ML is supposed to be pure but to me he's just the typical idiot of "I'm just good to the woman I love", I mean, he can't be pure if he was scheming to kill her.. I do see a bit of improvement but her thoughts are too basic and convenient. Edit: I do hope she'll be able to let go of her fantasy a bit.
@dani1234 my exact same thoughts, the MC really hasn't mature yet despite being an adult now. She's full of wrong fantasies, like portraying the 'heroine' as someone good even tho she got close to her little sister's finacé and even meeting him day after day without even giving her the right to meet him or say her name to him. Isn't that super mean and cruel? I'd be super upset as well, wtf I can't even say a word to him and I need to hide just because my sister now magically wants my fiance? It's super shady but she's not talking about it. Same with the guy, wtf dude, you're supposed to be the Crown Prince and yet u didn't give to your fiancee the least of respect she deserves and u should have given to her? Seriously, it sucks. It seems like hormones are really stronger than brains, values and I guess family. Why does her sister care about her now when she didn't care when she snatched her fiance?
Anyway, I'm glad that she's at risk and that serves her right, hopefully the next time she's being delusional she'll write a better story hahaha. :b