It's actually wrapped around and is a bit funny now. I can't even be upset at it because the direction was so predictable, as mentioned in previous chapters (here or on dynasty). I'm just in the "wow it really did do that, huh?" sort of space.Wake me up when this arc ends cause this useless drama already bores me
It was a good idea to introduce some degree of jealousy tho. It was just the execution that fell short.Definitely, this is a dumb arc.
The kouhai is badmouthing Mashiro since the start and Nagisa act now to tell her off (two chapter later, but well).
It can stop right here, right now. But no. She go off to say "I'll show you that, even with Mashiro as gf, I'm the best". we're in a shonen now ?. It's stupid af, nobody do that (well is romcom trope, but come on...). She don't have to prove anything to someone who is just a jerk to Mashiro.
And if Nagisa fail, Kouhai will harass Mashiro even more until a break up ?
The kouhai is part of the worst obstacle I've seen in a romcom : a device with no redeeming qualities. She's only here to torment Mashiro. And for what purpose ? character growth by guilt trip ?
This is badly written. Now, look forward for some drifting apart chapter because of a cheap artificial drama which fell flat.
the execution don't fell short, it's badly done.It was a good idea to introduce some degree of jealousy tho. It was just the execution that fell short.
This has honestly been a long time coming.Ngl, and I am typing this as a massive fan of this series, this has to be some of the worst writing in a (GL-)romance manga, ever.
This is so fucking flat. It just is a huge pile of nothing ruining whole characters. Feels 0% organic. Fully forced and robotic. Nothing flows.
It isn't because of the drama itself mind you. Both mains were reasonable and fighting the same evil that caused some.. intense stress(?) in Mashiro (questionable writing in itself at this point). It is the way the "misunderstandings" (they really aren't) were forced in with some of the worst conversation possible that makes this so insanely dogshit. Yikes.
This chapter proved that Nagisa is a fucking trash Girlfriend and that Mashiro deserve someone way better. Nagisa can get with the kouhai at this point, they deserve each otherI normally don't side with someone who just told "I don't want you to meet with your friend because I'm insecure" but I'm gonna side with Mashiro here just because that Kohai has been doing nothing but badmouthing her. It's not her place to decide what Nagisa does during her time or whom she hang out with. It's also fucking rude to decide that Mashiro is an obstacle.
For gooddess' sake, Naigasa shouldn't have to ask "Why". Girl, your so-called 'Kohai' just said that your girlfriend is just 'obstacle' to you and say bad about her every time and you asked why she doesn't want you to meet that girl. I don't know. maybe you should just recall what your kohai said about your girlfriend.