Wow this might be the worst chapter 1 I've seen in a long while. Like, absolute garbage writing. The only selling point is the ecchi and that's it. Might as well just write a doujinshi hentai and call it a day, really.
@ICYCOZY it's kinda hard to make it big in the doujin market with so many established names eating up a major share of the doujin market already. If you can get your title published it's way safer money.