@deadway I would suggest that this is the work of a teenager. I've read the Light Novel and ... what a difficulty to read! it's some of the single worst writing I have ever encountered.
That... being... said... I want to say that CClaw Translations (Thank you
@kikimanox for the uploads) did a stellar job of translating the Manga. Hate or love the story, both the Manga artist and the English translators have done a far better job in tandem than has the Light Novel writer. If the LN author is over 18, then he should probably consider working at McDonald's.
On the positive side: This is a very clean harem story. And that's about all the good I can say about it. I won't drop it, however. There are some elements that drove the manga artist to do this, y'know, probably... beyond making money. But it has a few shreds of appeal. Small, tattered shreds.