The Soulless Duchess - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

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Ohh...a whole year....I get that she wouldn't live for too long, but only one year to archive victory over the demon army and become heir? Make that 3 and it is more believable. Also imaging you travel one year into the past when you have been 21. That an enormous feat to pull off and would give you huge advantages, but would one of the first things you notice be "It's the year I have been 20."? "It's before I made this huge mistake!" "I can still turn things around!" Those are thinks you would think of, but "O!M!G! I'm still 20 instead of 21!"...nope. Not on the list.
 
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This is the whole "wish for someone else" from Madoka Magica all over again.
You desired something, didn't thought it through and the result was not what you expected. What? You feel betrayed?
Such foolisness...
 

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@Qelix yeah, that's what brought me to comments

I was guessing at least 3-4 years, a single year is a joke
 
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Yes... so terribly ugly. Slight discolorations and shifty eyes, truly great horrors to behold.

Also, are we sure they translate voluptuous correctly? Cause she aint.
 
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Well, when all you do is sacrifice yourself in the name of some self-satisfaction based love...this is what would happen more likely than not.

That said, nah. The baron and her cousin are bastards. Gay lovers is something I didn't expect, but literally nothing they did to or around her is morally justifiable in the least.

That said...yeah no. That's not "voluptuous". That doesn't even seem to be "curvy".
 
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@Psychronia Man this sounds mean but, lol. I guess the author loves anorexic people? I mean I'm guessing the other girls aren't as pretty because they are fat or something. Either that or they wanted everything to remain child friendly? I doubt the latter so I'll stick with the "the artist loves skinny people" theory.
 
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All she ever yearned for was for his love and happiness and this is her reward? Omg poor soul
 
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That's strike 2 for the artist. I hate it when stories tell me to believe things that's blatantly untrue. That girl is not voluptuous, and she looked like she had a bad tan at best, definitely not to the point of gaining such looks of disgust. Pity yeah, not disgust. Disfigure the bitch! Make her hideous, lumpy, boils covering her body, it's gonna be reversed in a couple of panels so go all out! It's like the art is perpetually mediocre.

I bet the story is gonna call the ML drop dead gorgeous and he's gonna look average as fck
 
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Those two guys are not gays. They are just faggots. Burn them at the stake.
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Art is mediocre story seems too, but it's too early to judge for now. Will see.
 
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@daallday much easier to simply describe someone as hideous than to draw it out. I don't think the author particularly wanted the reader to focus on her facial features. It was just to establish her pitiful situation of sacrificing herself only to learn of her husband having an affair.
 

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