Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Mar 9, 2019
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all i can say is that the art could've been better...
some of the perspective is a bit wonky, even on the cover it shows ( that right eye is abit farther and the sides are abit too thin... or that head to body ratio on her character introduction... you can maybe pass it off as her upper body leaning towards the viewer because she was surprised [ and that was prolly the intention ] , but it they didnt do a good job on it resulting to her having bigger head and shoulder ratios than her hip.. )
i cant say anything about the writing tho, im not a writer im just a mediocre artist...
but im prolly wrong on wat i said, most of the time i am... but thats how i see things i guess...
some of the perspective is a bit wonky, even on the cover it shows ( that right eye is abit farther and the sides are abit too thin... or that head to body ratio on her character introduction... you can maybe pass it off as her upper body leaning towards the viewer because she was surprised [ and that was prolly the intention ] , but it they didnt do a good job on it resulting to her having bigger head and shoulder ratios than her hip.. )
i cant say anything about the writing tho, im not a writer im just a mediocre artist...
but im prolly wrong on wat i said, most of the time i am... but thats how i see things i guess...