Tsuki ga Michibiku Isekai Douchuu - Vol. 8 Ch. 53 - The Disappearance of Misumi Makoto

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So, who's Sophia? And what the hell have been happening right now?

I've lost track of the story by now thanks to the side story...

Should've make another serialisation with the side story, instead of fuse it with the main story...
 
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I'm sorry, dear author, but choosing this method of story development to build suspense is just cowardly. You might think that you're achieving the same as Akira Toriyama did when he delayed the hell out the meeting between Goku and Freezer on Namek, but this is nowhere even close. We're talking a dozen time zones, here. By the time Gohan went to Namek with Bulma, all the characters were well-fleshed out, and we cared for them.

Here, the other heroes are obviously mere foils to the MC, yet they're being treated as if they were much more. Sorry, it doesn't work. We want the MC. You're a good author, but you're not that good. Not yet, anyway. It takes time for people to care for characters. Plus, none of the other heroes or their companions are as interesting as MC and his troops. So stop being overly ambitious and work on your strengths.

In other words, get your fucking shit together, bitch.

Not that the author will ever read this, but I really needed to get that off my chest.
 
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@Cednunnos
Probably a few more months before that glorious scene
One of my most anticipated scene that i always imagined seeing in manga form, since the first time I read it in WN
 
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@Cyoteblack is it a side story though?
wasnt the MC told by idk Tsukuyomi was it? as he was entering this new world that there will come a time when both heroes need his help
and he shouldnt hesitate to offer it to them?
so i mean i dunno if this should be regarded as a side story, its important
@TheBlueCat i dunno about cowardly but ye it is upsetting me at this point
monthly 26 pages and it doesn't feel like much is even happening
this entire chapter was... characters reflecting on what happened the previous chapter... character taking a hit and reeling from it, doubling down on the brutality of the fight? MC's location and weird cliffhanger
 
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I hope the author reconsiders and stops the walls of texts. i do not care about this new side characters so this chapter was a waste of time.
 
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Nice, I hope someone makes him angry. Then we’ll have a slaughter fest.
 
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Yay makoto rampage has begun
Kill them all kill those filthy humanoid thingy
 
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@TheBlueCat i agree, those bunch of trash doesnt need any depth story as our MC. Tho, it's a manga, probably the mangaka wanna try a build up based on his drawing
 
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I really need to look up the remaining chapters of the novel. I want to see that bi**h DIE.
And no, that's not a spoiler. Its just what I want to happen.

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You'll have to wait on that one. He doesn't do very well in this fight, due to surprise and the fact that when he used his hand to block he lost half the fingers on that hand.
Next time, on the other hand, he absolutely destroys her.
 
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Let's unleash your power Makoto! i can't wait for the next chap!!
 

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