this is a very compelling story, some of the characters are really likable and thy feel 'real', at least mostly.
i know that alot of transgender people will be relating to this and see their own story in this and such, and i don't wanna be the big baddie here or anything, but there is a little detail you guys are skipping.
these people never chose to ''transition''.
she was a woman all her life and suddenly woke up a man.
the transition you do to change your gender, she wanted to do to get back to her original gender.
completely out of comparison space here.
completely different mindset and situation.
with that out of the way, i hope they get a happy ending.