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I would've enjoyed this if it weren't full of expositions piled upon expositions every chapter. Like, show, don't tell author! The art is pretty enough as it is stop just wasting it on exposition
/rant over/
Really it's such wasted potential. Dropping this
/rant over/
Really it's such wasted potential. Dropping this