Whenever I get home, there's always a Kukkoro waiting for me - Ch. 3 - Holy Knight Marguerite (3)

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Ha. Of course he didn't die. Although the absorption of the magical sword bit does feel a bit forced.
 
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Hot ghost knight is wasted on that MC.

This feels like one of those things where the MC is a piece of shit, but the author doesn't want us to view him as a piece of shit.

If the psychopath MC was shameless I'd actually respect it but no, he's just another weirdo bland "everyman" that in an isekai would buy himself a child sex slave because he's meekly going with the flow.
 
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This is the kind of quality of writing and plot setup I'd expect out of a hentai. The lazy timeskip didn't do any good for characterizing him, or her for that matter, and their introductions were also glossed over in the author's rush to make it a SoL romcom.

Hot ghost knight is wasted on that MC.
My thoughts exactly. The sharp look of her face is cute, she's looks older and mature, she's tall, and she has good reactions to create a gap moe with her normal unyielding and no-nonsense attitude. She could make a cool FMC for a fantasy LN, just needs a little more time in the oven to make her a character instead of an archetype.
The MC on the other hand is as insipid as any other overly emotional protag.
 
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goodness gracious, puritan freaks should find something else to read, you've spent too much time on twitter following ragebait accs
 
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So... She dies, centuries later she appears as a Ghost and some randoms try tk exorcised her, a new guy saves her and he proceeds to grope and suck her tits, she becomes real and kills him, her sword is now trapped in him and she must live with him, no one say something about the abuse anymore... Author, if you wanted to make porn, you can do it, you don't need to make a serialized manga.
I wish this was porn tbh. Also, I don't think those guys were trying to exorcise her but rather, it was some kind of eternal damnation thing and they were part of her punishment.
 

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