Yami Kakusei Shite Shujinkou ni Bokosareru Kamaseinu ni Hyoui Shita ga Gensaku to Chigaisugite Tomadotteru - Ch. 16 - The Conclusion

[Grikath]

This is the GAY.

Bromance through fists and Nerdery.... 😉

 

[Yahya200]

Stand proud!!! You are STRONG

 

[Magnus_Prime]

Absolutely glacial pacing. The duel started in the latter half of chapter 12, and if it's finally ending here, that's ~28% of the manga thus far spent on one fight.

Damn, that's hard to recover from if you want readers to stay invested.

Dragonball pace.

 

[NeverAnother]

“Please dominate me again daddy.. I MEAN NO I WANT TO ENGAGE WIH YOU AGAIN- WAIT-"

 

[N2O]

 

[carrisa_lyna]

yaoi?

 

[Devilman22]

friend got

 

[Senpaithatfriendzonesyou]

That's EXACTLY the audience for this type of story. Not folks who get to have a whole 8 hours to sleep.

YEP. I have to remind myself with these that i am NOT the target audience, at the same time if you want to be a better writer read more. I guess you can say i am trying to find my story out of all of this.